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A Grandmother's Wisdom

A Grandmother's Wisdom All that my parents left me could fit into a paper sack carried like a leaden weight strung across my broken back A pair of bronzed booties a jacket and Tonka truck a small photo of Grandma along with a note of "Good Luck" I was left with confusion and an old coloring book but "stay within the lines son" was the only wisdom that I took As the years went by in the most sullen of ways I would often remember back to those bitter childhood days But now when I pine or look behind to my past the paper sack all torn the note to brittle to last The jacket's too small and the truck's all broken down the coloring book's all done the only crayon left is brown I no longer wonder why I was left out in the cold it doesn't matter anymore at least I wasn't sold I was raised by my Grandma and she taught me this one thing 'The next time you leave home, at least you'll know what to bring" (Feb. 24, 2016)

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Date: 2/27/2016 8:56:00 PM
I was moved by your story. Well-crafted and sincere. Your grandma sounds like a dynamite lady, with words that will stick with you, as the years go by. Wonderfully written.
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J. Tudor
Date: 2/27/2016 9:15:00 PM
Thank You kindly, your thoughts mean a lot. J....
Date: 2/24/2016 11:16:00 PM
I felt emotional...i truly love this :)...thank you for this
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J. Tudor
Date: 2/27/2016 9:12:00 PM
You are kind...Thank You. J.
Date: 2/24/2016 9:30:00 PM
G'day J ... a sad beginning but a triumph in the end - well done - Lindsay
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J. Tudor
Date: 2/24/2016 9:53:00 PM
Thank You Lindsay for you visit and kind comment. J.
Date: 2/24/2016 9:06:00 PM
Nice read. I've also written poems about my grandparents and the small farm they had. Fine memories they are. If I may suggest a correction: Last stanza, 2nd line: "and she taught me this one thing" not the way you have it. Your choicel Thank you for taking the time to read me. / M
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J. Tudor
Date: 2/24/2016 9:52:00 PM
Thank You kindly for pointing out my blunder, I don't know how I missed that! I have enjoyed your pieces for some time now, but for some reason your newest one just struck my fancy in a way I could not resist responding to. Reading you is always a pleasure. J.

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