A Good Young Lad

A Good Young Lad

A good young lad, a fine young man 
As fine as you might see
He gave his life for a noble cause 
To set his people free

Yet darker forces prompted him
To take the Martyr's path
And with cynical persuasion 
Primed a weapon for their wrath

They filled his head with foolishness
Half-truths and downright lies
They filled his heart with hatred
For the people they despise

So off to do their bidding
Causing carnage on the street
Yet hoping for redemption
When the slaughter is complete

Woe to the puppet masters
As evil as you'll find
Psychopathic despots 
Controlling fragile minds

A good young lad, a fine young man
As fine as you might see
He gave his life for no good cause
But a tragic fantasy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Bangalee Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 5:38 AM
good begets good, good youth begets strong future goodly/// beautiful pome
Linn Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:24 PM
I quite like your timely poem. It brings out the futility of war.
Brereton Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 12:47 PM
This is great work
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