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A Good Young Lad

A Good Young Lad A good young lad, a fine young man As fine as you might see He gave his life for a noble cause To set his people free Yet darker forces prompted him To take the Martyr's path And with cynical persuasion Primed a weapon for their wrath They filled his head with foolishness Half-truths and downright lies They filled his heart with hatred For the people they despise So off to do their bidding Causing carnage on the street Yet hoping for redemption When the slaughter is complete Woe to the puppet masters As evil as you'll find Psychopathic despots Controlling fragile minds A good young lad, a fine young man As fine as you might see He gave his life for no good cause But a tragic fantasy

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Date: 4/28/2019 5:38:00 AM
good begets good, good youth begets strong future goodly/// beautiful pome
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Date: 4/21/2019 7:24:00 PM
I quite like your timely poem. It brings out the futility of war.
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Date: 4/21/2019 12:47:00 PM
This is great work
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