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A Good Man To Me

He's everything that a man could be and more when it comes to him the heart adores the love that he gives is like no one else that you know his love together with yours is better than the winter's snow There's no mistake about his love and feelings for you he only wants to do what's right and make you more true a good man is this you see when he encourages he makes you feel like there's nothing On earth you can't be uponing seeing you he often cracks a smile Being with him is always worth the while he gently holds you tight in the middle of the night This good man unlike others will make sure that everything's alright he gives you love that you just can't resist a good man believe it or not Will always exist even when it's cold outside he will do his best to keep you warm a good man will not cause arguments or bodily harm My friend as the love of his life you are a good man would not hesitate in making you feel like a star ladies you dream of him even in your sleep A good man you will always strive to keep remember that he's more than words can ever say a good man no matter what unlike others he will never go away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/21/2009 5:51:00 PM
A good man is tough to find. I thought I had one, but was wrong. Nicely written. Keep writing.
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Date: 10/12/2009 12:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this Donielle! All good men need encouragement and this is indeed one! Peace and love, Audrey (ladybug12)
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Date: 10/12/2009 5:41:00 AM
A good poem to me........!cheers.
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Date: 10/11/2009 3:28:00 PM
I must agree with the other commenters. This is a great write, oh so descriptive, and true. Yo go girl! Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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Date: 10/11/2009 8:36:00 AM
I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you Donielle. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2009 6:03:00 PM
Amazing poem, a tribute to good men, still a few around, maybe a very few. Beautiful poem I loved it. Sincerely, Love, Moses thanks for your comments on my verses,
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Date: 10/10/2009 12:53:00 PM
That is write a good man is one that cares, protects and provides for his love ones. Keep writing. Sara
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