Poesy Relish Poet Sijo

A Glorious Field - Visual 2

Yields of green fields basked in HIS glory are being challenged

Twilight reveals long dreary paths, destination ambiguous

Only the righteous reap great bounty at the terminus.

©Nadiya (29 Jan '15)

*Won Honorable Mention in the contest 'Glorious Sijo Field's by Andrea Dietrich on 07  Feb 2015

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:45 PM Hi Poesy, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT Poesy Relish February 15, 2015 at 11:00 PM Thank you my dear friend... lov n hugs

Sara Kendrick February 10, 2015 at 3:53 PM Enjoyed reading your work...I like the faith approach..Congrats..Sara Poesy Relish February 10, 2015 at 10:38 PM Thank you very much Sara... pleased that you liked it.. appreciate your visit... nad!

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 2:41 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs jan xx Poesy Relish February 8, 2015 at 3:07 PM Thank you dear. Lov nad!

Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 9:07 AM Despite sylable count I love the poem and message! Poesy Relish February 8, 2015 at 11:57 AM Thank you very much Richard... you are ever encouraging

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 8, 2015 at 4:21 AM Congrats Nad, be careful next time about form/syllable count etc. as Andrea said. God bless, Nad...rajat Poesy Relish February 8, 2015 at 5:27 AM Thank you Rajat for your sound advise... lov,nad!

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 1:18 AM I think you had a great spiritual message with your poem. I marked it lower for syllable count being off in line three. Congrats on your HM. Poesy Relish February 8, 2015 at 5:26 AM Thank you Andrea for the interesting topic... yes i was a bit ignorant i guess... happy that i got to try a new form ... luv n hugs,nad!

Frederic Parker January 31, 2015 at 6:24 PM thank you for reading my visual 2, I see you wrote a more spiritual poem and I a more earthly poem..an interesting reflection of who we are...good luck in the contest my poetic friend Poesy Relish January 31, 2015 at 8:48 PM Thank you Frederick for reading my write as well... have anice weekend.

Earl Schumacker January 31, 2015 at 11:02 AM Hi Nadiya, I posted and rated this with the highest score of 7 in the system. I hope Andrea Dietrich likes it. You did a great job. Great creation. Take care. Earl Poesy Relish January 31, 2015 at 11:49 AM Thank you Earl... pleased that you liked my pen... appreciate your rating of 7 and for taking time to visit my page with your lovely words...regards... nad!

Mohan Chutani January 30, 2015 at 10:54 PM Nadiya, A lovely write. Best for contest. Mohan Poesy Relish January 30, 2015 at 11:04 PM Pleased that you think so. Thank you very much Mohan.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2015 at 12:22 PM - I hope this lovely poem will win - Breathtaking, dear Nadiya ! - // Anne-Lise :) Poesy Relish January 30, 2015 at 1:27 PM Anne-Lise, your comments never fail to encourage me... appreciate your continued support friend.

Eve Roper January 30, 2015 at 11:07 AM Beautiful spiritual write, Nad. A 7 Blessings Eve Poesy Relish January 30, 2015 at 11:18 AM thank you Eve... appreciate your visit... hugs.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 29, 2015 at 10:51 PM spiritually charged poem.Most beautiful.My fav. Love Nad> Good luck in the contest> Sure a topper>rajat Poesy Relish January 29, 2015 at 11:04 PM Thank you so much friend... for your support and encouraging words... appreciate it... nads!

Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 3:21 PM Stunning spiritual write Nadiya - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx Poesy Relish January 29, 2015 at 3:29 PM Thank you Jan... very much appreciate your visit and comment... hugs.

Nette Onclaud January 29, 2015 at 2:45 PM oh my, nads... a splendid piece that nourishes the soul.. much delighted..namaste and huggs Poesy Relish January 29, 2015 at 2:52 PM Thank you Nette for your kind words and continued support... namaste my friend.. lov, nad!