A Glimpse of Divinity

As blue skies fade out of view, mortal eyes look up to see a glimpse of divinity. Cerise tints the horizon; as ribbons of crimson light adorn the fringes of night. And as clear crystals of ice color cottony clouds pink; a scarlet sun starts to sink. An ebony umbrella morphs into a veil of stars; high above Venus and Mars. And in the still of twilight; silence admonishes sound, as the day slowly shuts down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Love this stanza "An ebony umbrella morphs into a veil of stars high above Venus and Mars. "
Pinet Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 3:52 PM
Thank you so much Line, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Adams Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Another seven for me, Emile. You have the magic touch, painting vivid pictures with your words. Lovely.
Pinet Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Thank you so much, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Explosion of beauty in verses divine! Certain a seven, my friend, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 8:05 AM
Thanks Demetrios, I appreciate your kind words. Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 5:30 PM
ohh, how visual and tranquil are your words so eloquently designed, emile... fascinating write.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Thanks Nette, I value your opinion. Emile.
Smith Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 3:46 PM
A beautiful sunset Emile...I love the fourth stanza...A veil of stars..perfect..A 7 +++
Pinet Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 4:09 PM
Thanks Tim, your friendly words warm my heart. Emile.
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