A Girl's Wings

And in the girl's head
The shoulders that used to hold wings
Now held the weight of the world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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October 20, 2025 at 9:09 AM
Dang girl!
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February 24, 2025 at 6:24 AM
Profound!
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February 25, 2025 at 8:25 AM
Thank you ! :)
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February 24, 2025 at 5:31 AM
Wow! Great one, Brooke!
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February 25, 2025 at 8:26 AM
Wow! I greatly appreciate your comment! When I joined this sight two days ago, I didn't expect people to see my poems, let alone like them!
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