A Girl's Wings

And in the girl's head
The shoulders that used to hold wings
Now held the weight of the world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 2/24/2025 6:24:00 AM
Profound!
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Brooke Zerbs
Date: 2/25/2025 8:25:00 AM
Thank you ! :)
Date: 2/24/2025 5:31:00 AM
Wow! Great one, Brooke!
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Brooke Zerbs
Date: 2/25/2025 8:26:00 AM
Wow! I greatly appreciate your comment! When I joined this sight two days ago, I didn't expect people to see my poems, let alone like them!
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