A Girl and a Boy

There was a girl who really liked this boy
But he had no idea, as she was very coy
They had known each other for years;
And had shared laughter and tears.
Daily they would hang out and talk
And played outside without shoes and socks
Running around and having fun,
Enjoying each other without anyone
Else, as it did not matter,
When they were apart both were sadder.
This girl really wanted to be more than friends;
But, as you know, summer time quickly ends
And the girl didn’t have the courage to summon a kiss,
She imagined it would be hit or miss
And she was afraid that it wouldn’t be right
Or, somehow they would end up in a fight.
It was late in August and there was a fair in town,
Of course, the two went together to hang around
When the boy went to buy a coke,
There was this cute girl who told him a joke
They shared a laugh and a smile,
Both were quite smitten as they talked for awhile
Together they went and found his other friend,
He casually said good bye so he could spend
Time with the cute girl, who quickly held his hand,
But, she was going to leave soon -- as she played in the traveling band.
So the boy did not call his friend for several days,
This made her quite sad, lonely and dismayed
The fair left town; and they were back in school,
The boy found his friend, but she walked away cold
In class he was worried and wrote her a note,
He asked to meet after school by the lake and in the boat
Where they had often spent hours
His friend showed up and she had brought him flowers
The girl just grabbed his hand and she looked him in his eyes,
Slowly kissed his lips and caught him by surprise.
The two talked for hours and said how they felt,
The words were real and made both their hearts melt
From that day forward they shared everything,
No more hidden feelings as confusion it can bring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 1/8/2017 11:01:00 PM
Beautifully penned!! I could feel the emotions flowing within as your poem reminded me of one such girl I had in my life...and the sad thing is I could not get her...but here the ending is so positive. Loved reading it and thank you for sharing this masterpiece!!
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Date: 1/8/2017 9:58:00 PM
No more love lost to fear and insecurity! I love it!
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Date: 10/18/2016 11:13:00 PM
BRAD MILLER, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2016 9:41:00 PM
Brad Miller, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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