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A Gin-Swilling Riverboat Captain Tb

glare eye to eye
gin ship lie stuck
spent idle lost


11/25/20202


Than-Bauk Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina


A Than-Bauk poem consists of 3 lines.
Each line consists of 4 syllables.
The last syllable of the 1st line,
 The 3rd syllable of the second line
 And the 2nd syllable of the third line.
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Allison Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Good one Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. Eye to eye, wonder what they were thinking. Love the write and pictures. Enjoy your win with blessings.....................
Kauffman Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 9:19 PM
Love your nod to the "African Queen," Eve. Congratulations!
Kindness Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 4:09 AM
Wow, a great poem.Congratulation...! May you be well and happy...!
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 3:48 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara
Jayasankar Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 10:26 PM
This is so well done.. Congrats on your placement Eve. Have a great weekend. ~ Ani
Seeker Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:42 PM
Congrats on your win Eve!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on your placement for this clever piece!!
Y. Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Hi Even, Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Enjoy your day and weekend:-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Very nicely done, Eve. The African Queen is one of my favorite old-time movies. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Stay well dear friend.. Hugs Charlie
May Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 7:59 PM
Very nicely penned Eve, best wishes in the contest
Horsman Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 4:34 AM
Love this Eve, and the vision.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Love this :) Happy Thanksgiving and God bless you
One Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 4:10 AM
Nice one Eve..
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