Get Your Premium Membership

A Gift

A GIFT
You've given me a piece of your soul Inside a sunken brown envelope written handle with care As if I was born heavy-handed. You've telescoped my soul once more In its caravan on a mountain slope Stooped by a bulky backpack. It's good you've frozen that portion of my long journey I could have missed the sun just because I stooped too low That I could only see my heavy footsteps. I've always known when I unwrapped your love With my crystal-pure letter opener, I’ve trapped a powerful force That allows me to forge ahead with its timely smiles! What I just received is a static showcase of dynamic love!
Dalila Agtani Entered in a contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/20/2011 11:16:00 AM
I really liked your approach here, Dalila :) enjoyed the metaphors you used here too-- keep on writing I think you have a gift ;) and enjoy your week! Thank you so much for all your inspiring words in my poems :D
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs