A Ghostly Tear

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O’ crooked branch and magpie’s claw,
yon rusted chains a’ sway this night
Clutch tight a sign “The Seagull's Squall”
of splintered wood and storm clouds fight
Old tavern lone this craggy shore
where angered waves accost the sand
and drenching rains from heavens pour,
whilst thunder boasts its loud command

On creaking stools with painted legs
'long the bar, a gathered crew
Expected flow from aging kegs
a frothy crown this lagered brew
Fills tankards held of one now gone
'midst pewter death in golden ale
In drunk'n stupor sorrows shown
lost at sea, his soul last sailed

Watching cloaked of shadowed mist
in darkened corner, lingered smoke
O’er long goodbyes on echoes twist 
and couraged voices soundly spoke
Weaving tales a' journeys past,
voyages beyond the deep
Ports o’ call and forth day cast,
of treasures that abound to reap  

When one, a glass above his head
beckons silence, moments slow
Respect, our mate now swallow'd dead,
entombed within the depths below
Then hearty cheers and farewell speak,
this touching scene if one would be
A ghostly tear now falls my cheek,
this fallen mate they cheer is me

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Date: 10/19/2021 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun~~story/write. Love it. Have a blessed autumn day
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Date: 10/18/2021 11:58:00 AM
That was quite a tale, Chris. Congratulations on its win.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2021 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Jenna, happy you liked it
Date: 10/18/2021 10:44:00 AM
Very impressive Chris. Full of poetic images and creativity as you hover above the scene. Congratulations on your win. All the best.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2021 6:31:00 AM
Thanks so very much Sam
Date: 11/11/2019 4:17:00 AM
One of the best poems I have ever read Chris! Straight into my Faves! I was not expecting that last line. This is a poem I will certainly read over and over. Best as always...Ron
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Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much.
Date: 10/17/2019 9:59:00 AM
This is a fantastic write Chris! I’ve read it a few times. I love everything about it but especially the twist in the tale :-) x
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 2:27:00 PM
Aww thank you Chris :-) x
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2019 10:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Elaine. That means a lot coming form a talented poet like yourself
Date: 10/12/2019 6:57:00 PM
Excellent poem. Very fluent writing.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2019 10:10:00 AM
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply, I never saw this.
Date: 10/12/2019 1:45:00 PM
I enjoy a good ghost story that is told well and this one was no exception... I really like the rhythm and rhyme of this poem, and it's final twist, which I did not expect... Excellent work Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kelly. I am thrilled you enjoyed this little ghostly tale. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 10/11/2019 10:18:00 PM
Such an impressive write. I just love it so. Your words are always amazing me and I wish you love and prayers, Gina
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Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Gina for all the kindness you show me.
Date: 10/11/2019 6:38:00 PM
a man of many talents you are...this was an amazing write...like a write out of the days of old when pirates plagued the seas, chilling ending but very well penned my friend...:) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2019 7:48:00 AM
Just trying something a little different. Trying to get my sea-legs. : ) Thank you Sandy. I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 10/11/2019 6:12:00 PM
Aye, matey, ghostly indeed ~ no more pillagin' and plunderin' for ya ~ and no more booty, ya poor lad... lol ;) This was an amazing piece of writing with language that felt perfectly in sync with the times and people you were trying to portray! Epic, my friend!!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2019 7:46:00 AM
Arrr, that made me smile. Thank you my friend. Your nice comments are always something that touches my heart.
Date: 10/11/2019 5:18:00 PM
Wow, an amazing poem Chris. Worth reading more than once too. Well done! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 5:19:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Just trying something a little different. I decided to show a darker side with this one.
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