Mick Talbot Poet Rhyme

A Gentle Touch a Rhyming Wave Poem

when I felt you, a gentle touch,
my gentle, gentle, gentle touch.
you explode, true love we both clutch.
you explode, satisfied!

true love passions were not denied,
no, were not, were not denied.
forty-eight years of love and pride.
one touch so much goodwill,

the joy of life it enthrals us still,
enthrals, enthrals, enthrals us still.
we are ready, both have a will
were ready, life moves on

if there's another way as strong,
a way as, way as, way as strong?
where all is good, nothing wrong
will we still feel loves rush? 

when I felt you, a gentle touch,
will we still feel loves rush?

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Emile Pinet July 20, 2018 at 12:11 PM Your feelings come through strong and straight from the heart where most good poetry is born. It paints a picture with words that make you feel them...this is hard to accomplish and you done it well. Emile. Mick Talbot July 20, 2018 at 2:59 PM Your to kind Emile, I'm humbled and most gracious, thank you, Mick

Lyric Man July 19, 2018 at 8:45 AM Mick.. I could see this as a really good love song! Mick Talbot July 20, 2018 at 2:58 PM Thank you for those kind words LM appreciated, Mick

Anne-Lise Andresen July 19, 2018 at 4:23 AM - Beautiful poem, Mick :) - Enjoy the roses along the road of life ... we go that way only once :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mick Talbot July 19, 2018 at 6:38 AM ..............roses... silent words........... words of love and thanks... their gift...... .................violets agree.................................. ..shame they both have to be picked........................ .....so their voices can be heard............................ .............................................................................Thank you Anne-Lise, for the inspiration too, hugs Mick

Charlie Smith July 18, 2018 at 4:18 PM A wave of passion to this one Mick, well done. Almost lyrical in nature... Mick Talbot July 18, 2018 at 4:48 PM Haha, Lines 1 through 3 are Iambic tetrameter and line 4 is iambic trimeter, so yes your right Charlie, lyrical it is. Thank you for your kind words, Mick