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A Gentle Touch a Rhyming Wave Poem

when I felt you, a gentle touch, my gentle, gentle, gentle touch. you explode, true love we both clutch. you explode, satisfied! true love passions were not denied, no, were not, were not denied. forty-eight years of love and pride. one touch so much goodwill, the joy of life it enthrals us still, enthrals, enthrals, enthrals us still. we are ready, both have a will were ready, life moves on if there's another way as strong, a way as, way as, way as strong? where all is good, nothing wrong will we still feel loves rush? when I felt you, a gentle touch, will we still feel loves rush?

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Date: 7/20/2018 12:11:00 PM
Your feelings come through strong and straight from the heart where most good poetry is born. It paints a picture with words that make you feel them...this is hard to accomplish and you done it well. Emile.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/20/2018 2:59:00 PM
Your to kind Emile, I'm humbled and most gracious, thank you, Mick
Date: 7/19/2018 8:45:00 AM
Mick.. I could see this as a really good love song!
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Date: 7/20/2018 2:58:00 PM
Thank you for those kind words LM appreciated, Mick
Date: 7/19/2018 4:23:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Mick :) - Enjoy the roses along the road of life ... we go that way only once :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/19/2018 6:38:00 AM
..............roses... silent words........... words of love and thanks... their gift...... .................violets agree.................................. ..shame they both have to be picked........................ .....so their voices can be heard............................ .............................................................................Thank you Anne-Lise, for the inspiration too, hugs Mick
Date: 7/18/2018 4:18:00 PM
A wave of passion to this one Mick, well done. Almost lyrical in nature...
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:48:00 PM
Haha, Lines 1 through 3 are Iambic tetrameter and line 4 is iambic trimeter, so yes your right Charlie, lyrical it is. Thank you for your kind words, Mick

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