A Gentle Lady's Plight

A gentle lady’s plight 
falls like leaves off a branch in winter
afore beauty coveted in her youth takes flight
as her barren turned roots make 
admirers frown in displeasure

her barks covered in snow
turns brittle offering no shade nor fruit
yet the axe-bearers come 
hacking at her trunk with relentless brute
and took away what little she had 
for themselves to use as fuel
 
a kindled fire warms their cold stiff bodies
while keeping them full
they looked at each other and said
what wrong did we commit 

there were no flowers to appreciate
in the middle of winter they mused

hence they agreed amongst themselves  
it was her only value.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Grahamburglar Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 9:35 AM
One must question the society which sees only the selfish ways in which they can benefit from another. I also appreciate how you conveyed not just a failure to fully appreciate what was or is, but also the failure to see future value. This kind of reminds me of The Giving Tree, but colder in a way. Very insightful write.
Yan Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Thank you so much! I love your thoughtful illustration and kindly compliment of my poem, Grahamburglar! :D
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations to you on your poem being featured on POTW. Way to go. I am not sure if this a metaphor presenting for a lady growing older, but I like to see it interpreted that way. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Yan Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts, Sara! I didn't even know I got featured until I read your comment. You are also right on the dot with the metaphor, but it's really open to any interpretation in general ^^
Agustin Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 3:49 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Yan Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 6:30 PM
Thank you for your kind words and blessing Beata! Christ is King! ^^
Daniels Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:28 PM
Lovely observation & narration, Grace. You’ve effectively captured the dictates of nature. ThkU for sharing. Keep writing to voice your Beingness. Sending blessings from South Africa., Ghairo. X
Yan Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:49 PM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Ghairo! Will for sure keep on writing :D
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