A Gentle Lady Who Looks Back

Leaning on the deluxe seat,
She munches banana chips.
Her handsome husband breathes near
And an air-cooler blows chill.
Yet, she looks back from the car.

The vehicles fly, scattering on road.
One bike chases so close,
As it tries to kiss the car.
His hand has locked her shoulder;
Often, they swing together in ditches.
Yet, she looks back from the car.

He made her shine in rare jewels.
The moments sway in chitchat.
Now, their car diverts
To some pleasure zenith.
Yet,it is unknown why she looks back.


FABIYAS M V
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 10:13 PM
Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Fabiyas
Guzzi Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 11:35 AM
I enjoyed this very much too..soup mail
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 12:10 AM
mysterious and intriguing write FABIYAS .. leaving conclusion to imagination.. perhaps another luv left behind.. I always think on luv u know..
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 10:55 PM
this is so interesting and different, Fabiyas. IS it someone you saw from a car window yourself? WEll done.
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