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Written: November 21, 2023 _________________________________________ Amid the shooting stars, there is a lot of zeal While satellites start spinning in various ordeals Even blinking lights on the aircraft while in flight Boost the vibe and thrill stargazers with delight. Over the day, the sun swings from east to west The stars in the sky seem to be taking a rest But at dusk, when the earth appears to sleep I eagerly await the night to uncover its awe-deep. Their light cuts so deeply into the abyss. Lifting our tired minds out of a deep remiss They whisper wisdom that only sages can hear Leading us on an adventure without fear. Winds whispering, a breath, a soft kiss Grasping leaves in serene nature bliss Each zephyr conveys secrets across the air Unbearable layers of love are beyond compare. Stars dance unfettered amid the vastness Often pondering sitting with skeptic madness Is that a star or a satellite? Am I seeing beauty? It's feasible for love, as a torn face, to seem sooty.

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Date: 11/20/2023 3:13:00 PM
dearest Sotto-as I read your words I envisioned myself as an astronaut traveling through space on the images you created. I yearned to be the adventurer perhaps seeking love as vast as the universe - I liked these lines: Stars dance unfettered amid the vastness. You're such a masterful and artistic poet. I find your words compelling. Have a pleasant evening, Sara Often pondering sitting with skeptic madness
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Date: 11/20/2023 12:10:00 PM
A lovely/beautiful ~ write/picture. I love the night sky... Have a great day............
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Date: 11/20/2023 10:17:00 AM
I do love watching the night sky with it's many diamonds and sparkling patterns . Here in the northwest there are also the Northern Lights. So beautiful. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/20/2023 8:59:00 AM
- I see beauty ... the starry sky is so beautiful at this time of the year ... a wonderful poem, Las :) - hugs
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