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A Garden Eden

Let me flow into deep rivers,
to islands of eternal life.
Where nature's unspoilt dreams revive.
A Garden Eden this should be
for all the people hopefully.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 27, 2009 at 8:06 PM

I love thinking about the Bible and the Garden of Eden. When I think of the Garden of Eden, I think about Pangaea as it relates to the rivers that went through the Garden. Then,I think about Adam and Eve being expelled. (Probably set near the modern day Tigris and Euphrates- the heart of early Civilization.) Then, light bulb goes off. The oceans with continents drifting apart were probably the rivers that went through the Garden. (Protected by flames... mid-oceanic ridge has flames!) Thanks

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 25, 2009 at 3:26 AM

What a lovely poem you have written here, Gert. We are blessed with many beautiful gardens, maintained by mankind. But none as beautiful as God's interdependent, self- sustaining, handiwork. (Here is a link to a beautiful garden where I spent many childhood days with my best friend. I hope you enjoy the virtual visit.) http://www.fairchildgarden.org/ Love, Dane P.S. I don't speak German. My spouse does, though. Keep the poems flowing! BIG SMILE.

Charmaine Chircop

October 22, 2009 at 2:28 PM

Good luck with your moving:)Charma

Adell Foster

October 1, 2009 at 11:28 AM

Gert this is truly an esquisite read,excellent imagery and rhythmic tone flowing throughout,it is a pleasure to read for you. :-)God Bless, Always, Adell

Sara Kendrick

September 30, 2009 at 3:43 AM

Love the underflow of the spirit. Nicely done work. Thanks for your comments on mine. Keep writing. Sara

James Marshall Goff

September 29, 2009 at 8:48 PM

great message! great poem! Gert!... jim

P Sheart

September 29, 2009 at 2:24 PM

Hey there Gert, How ya doing...Love your sentiments here. Ah, Wouldn't this world be something if we could all wake up to a garden of eden. In my dreams I do, but then I wake up sigh. A beautiful heart and a beautiful Rhyme. Keep writing hun and I'll keep reading! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Carolyn Devonshire

September 29, 2009 at 1:37 PM

How wonderful it would be to wake up in a "Garden of Eden" where dreams are kept whole by the promise of eternal life. Very thought-provoking verse, Gert. Well done!! Love, Carolyn