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A Garden Choice Review Dawn chanced a lifetime free trial, aged step heeds reflects takes a smile, advent ease midst obliged swart rise, upraised eyelids greet resumed ties, Askew motif skirts gracious sky, root arbor involved climbs, brace I, beg my visit be naught seduced, by verdant needs that I conduced, So that my stay appease awhile, sense garden bear test and trial, light bred butterflies freely pause, sweet nectar kids the air for cause, Circular flight breath-taking view, vultures outcast, humming's in lieu, buds mosaic film swaddled highs, bristled piquant seeps amid byes, Proud Asters craves near pergola, challenged view graced Gladiola, peaceful corner shrined Lilies grow, pomp Peonies dressed, heels a row, Daisies pray, tops gold masque faces, dons Sunday whites, kirtled bases, Roses steals random spendthrift rays, soft fate spares prodigal scent sprays, Cherry Blossoms sublets space loft, Poppies darts to join sky, face waft, Lavender peeks, probing yon fence, while Stonecrops hugs, wholly dense, Well-played Zinnias, grand casting, and faint Hydrangeas lacks fasting, Larkspurs cherishing stellar show, pebbled stools crept patron burrow, Daffodils ochers paired sunlight, dreamt Gardenias sniffs midnight, Buttercups box, a game of chess, Meadows re Persians more or less, Azalea teeming, Chives parade, Orchids poise, Tulip's serenade, spurns yon green Periwinkle blue, sad bids my prized garden adieu. 2020 July 28 *2nd Place* Petal, buds, blossoms, bees, birds, butterflies! ~~Silent One

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Date: 8/4/2020 3:55:00 PM
Your garden is packed full with beautiful flowers, William . BIG congrats for your win.
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/4/2020 10:25:00 PM
Most indubitably a friend of confidence, Andrea, in-kind, Aloha! William
Date: 8/2/2020 8:46:00 AM
William, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/2/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thank you sweet, Eve, for your kindness my friend, Aloha! William
Date: 8/2/2020 2:59:00 AM
Woah! This is one brilliant muse from your pen as usual, bubbling with immense creativity and splendid imagery in vibrant motions. I read it twice and found new gems hidden in your words each time. Congratulations on your win William :)
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/2/2020 11:20:00 AM
An indepth analysis, Aditi, that is well taken my friend, thank you, Aloha! William
Date: 8/1/2020 12:03:00 PM
- A garden of my dream ... it sounds so beautiful, William :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/1/2020 2:02:00 PM
I am grateful, Anne-Lise, for your welcoming words my friend, Aloha! William
Date: 8/1/2020 8:21:00 AM
A lovely pome full of imagery. Flows and rhymes very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/1/2020 8:38:00 AM
Thanks for the opportunity and placement, Silent One, Aloha! William
Date: 7/29/2020 4:48:00 AM
Your poem blooms in beauty of flowers and splendorous delight, William.
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William Kekaula
Date: 7/29/2020 9:32:00 AM
Many thanks, Vijay, for your thoughtful sharing my friend -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/29/2020 1:35:00 AM
Good Evening from Aus, William. Your poem had me pulled in right away. I can sense the peace you allow yourself in garden splendour. I truly never read any poems on here more than once, however was pleased to imbibe your intrinsic poetic patter. I know writes are extremely personal, - tentatively I wish to offer suggestion. In the pergola stanza, - a possibile third line could end in ' gladiolus'. The 'u' pronounced 'a'. Funnel thrusting blades of gladiolus. Your poem is dazzling, very strong.
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William Kekaula
Date: 7/29/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you for your welcomed insight, whereto, I gladly made the change and elsewhere too. Hope I gave it what it needed--justifiably, again, much appreciated for your sincere in-depth review, my friend -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/29/2020 1:42:00 AM
Of course, I'm referring to second line! Ta.