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*Image of Park Colorful Flower Beds by Pixabay. A Garden Choice Review Dawn chanced a lifetime free trial, aged step heed, reflect takes a smile, advent ease midst obliged swart rise, upraised eyelids, greet resumed ties. Askew motif skirts gracious sky, root arbor involved climbs, brace I, beg my visit be naught seduced, by verdant needs that I conduced. So that my stay appease awhile, sense garden bear test and trial, light bred butterflies freely pause, sweet nectar kids air for a cause. Circular flight, breath-taking view, vultures outcast, humming in lieu, buds mosaic film swaddled highs, bristled piquant seeps amid byes. Proud Asters craves near pergola, challenged view graced Gladiola, peaceful corner shrined Lilies grow, pomp Peonies dressed, heels a row. Daisies pray, tops gold masque faces, dons Sunday whites, kirtled bases, Roses steals random spendthrift rays, soft fate spares prodigal scent sprays. Cherry Blossoms sublets space loft, Poppies darts to the sky, face waft, Lavender peeks, probing yon fence, while Stonecrops hugs, wholly dense. Well-played Zinnias, grand casting, and faint Hydrangeas lacks fasting, Larkspurs cherishing stellar show, pebbled stools crept patron burrow. Daffodils ochers paired sunlight, dreamt Gardenias sniffs midnight, Buttercups box, a game of chess, Meadows re Persians more or less. Azalea teeming, Chives parade, Orchids poise, Tulip's serenade, spurns yon green Periwinkle blue, sad bids my prized garden adieu. Revised: 2020 July 28 Original: 2020 April 01 *2nd Place* Garden Inspirations ~~BJ Legros Kelley: Judging 2022 April 20 *1st Place* A Brian Strand Rhyme ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 August 09 *2nd Place* Petal, buds, blossoms, bees, birds, butterflies! ~~Silent One: Judged 2020 April 02

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/20/2022 7:31:00 PM

Variety of flowers well-painted. All come alive. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/20/2022 8:16:00 PM

Your soul, Christuraj, is truly a blessing my friend, Aloha~William

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 4/20/2022 6:11:00 PM

Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your high placing win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest Hilo! What a lovely garden! :) <3 ~BJ

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/20/2022 6:35:00 PM

I'm appreciative of your conscionable qualities, BJ, blessings my friend, Aloha~William

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2021 2:41:00 PM

Creatively descriptive! Congrats on your win, William! Blessings, Kim M

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/11/2021 2:59:00 PM

Kim, I am truly grateful my friend, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/10/2021 1:57:00 AM

Very Picturesque. Congratulations on your win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/10/2021 2:03:00 AM

A day of color, Christuraj, for that is you my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2020 3:55:00 PM

Your garden is packed full with beautiful flowers, William . BIG congrats for your win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/4/2020 10:25:00 PM

Most indubitably a friend of confidence, Andrea, in-kind, Aloha! William

Eve Roper

Date: 8/2/2020 8:46:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/2/2020 11:22:00 AM

Thank you sweet, Eve, for your kindness my friend, Aloha! William

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/2/2020 2:59:00 AM

Woah! This is one brilliant muse from your pen as usual, bubbling with immense creativity and splendid imagery in vibrant motions. I read it twice and found new gems hidden in your words each time. Congratulations on your win William :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/2/2020 11:20:00 AM

An indepth analysis, Aditi, that is well taken my friend, thank you, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2020 12:03:00 PM

- A garden of my dream ... it sounds so beautiful, William :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/1/2020 2:02:00 PM

I am grateful, Anne-Lise, for your welcoming words my friend, Aloha! William

Silent One

Date: 8/1/2020 8:21:00 AM

A lovely pome full of imagery. Flows and rhymes very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/1/2020 8:38:00 AM

Thanks for the opportunity and placement, Silent One, Aloha! William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/29/2020 4:48:00 AM

Your poem blooms in beauty of flowers and splendorous delight, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/29/2020 9:32:00 AM

Many thanks, Vijay, for your thoughtful sharing my friend -- Aloha~@William

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 7/29/2020 1:35:00 AM

Good Evening from Aus, William. Your poem had me pulled in right away. I can sense the peace you allow yourself in garden splendour. I truly never read any poems on here more than once, however was pleased to imbibe your intrinsic poetic patter. I know writes are extremely personal, - tentatively I wish to offer suggestion. In the pergola stanza, - a possibile third line could end in ' gladiolus'. The 'u' pronounced 'a'. Funnel thrusting blades of gladiolus. Your poem is dazzling, very strong.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/29/2020 3:25:00 AM

Thank you for your welcomed insight, whereto, I gladly made the change and elsewhere too. Hope I gave it what it needed--justifiably, again, much appreciated for your sincere in-depth review, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 7/29/2020 1:42:00 AM

Of course, I'm referring to second line! Ta.