A Funny Car Poem

She fell out of the car yesterday 
While she and I were conniving.
Which would not have been such a big deal
If she had not been the one driving.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Shades of Ogden Nash! A hearty laugh was had by this reader! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 11:16 PM
I loved this one the second it grabbed me.
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 2:22 PM
gas pain from laughing, caren!...huggs
Krutsinger Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Nette. It wrote itself and laughed at my expression.
Lee Sr. Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 12:15 PM
awesomely FUNNY, MY FRIEND LOL! James :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Thank you. It came to me and I laughed of course!
Trifiatis Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 5:52 AM
Delightfully written dear, Caren...despite the ...accident! haha !
Krutsinger Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 2:11 PM
My sister was hugging a car door once, because our mean great-aunt school teacher had insisted she ride home with her after making her serve a detention after school. The door opened and my sister fell out in the street. It was a really funny story!
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 2:05 AM
ha ha ha :-) hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 2:46 AM
Thank you Jan. Smiling now.
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