A Fun Filled Secret

7/16/2014

An adventure I went
on
Full of laughter,
cheer and fun
A country themed day
that I will
Talk about, secrets
wont spill
First dressing like
cowgirls do
Tight fitting jeans
baby blue
Next a shirt with
hanging tassels
Snaps, not buttons,
prevent hassles
A belt buckle so
cute and shiny
Not big, a little
less tiny
A cowgirl hat on top
my head
No brown, pretty
pink instead
Special ordered
boots to wear
Fringe and spurs put
on with care
All decked out to
have a night
That will be a pure
delight
My first country
club experience
Filled with care
free innocence
Music gets my feet a
tappin'
Not knowing how this
just happened
Somehow over the
course of time
I was in a dancing
line
Not drunk, but
losing all my
balance
I was doing moves so
freelance
Soon I was sitting
on a bull
Hanging on tightly
up until
Someone cranked it
up to high
I shot off into the
sky
My singing is way to
scary
To do any karaoke
Now I'm on stage out
of tune
Surprised I haven't
cleared the room
Hours go by and I
find
I can not leave this
behind
Making a promise to
come back
Everybody loved my
act
Of a first timer at
this place
I never left a
single trace
My secret is safe of
course
That I am really a
HORSE
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July 29, 2014 at 12:57 PM
Robin, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:09 PM
sense of tongue in cheek fun Robin love it congrats on win hugs
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Great seeing this on the winners list! terrific!!
Devonshire Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Love the way you built up the suspense, Robin. Hadn't even suspected a horse was getting all this action. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:35 AM
Haha...love the twist...congrats
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Robin that's a brilliant write n so deserving high winner,, big congrats !
Mehta Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Love this, congrats on a fine win, robin
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 8:38 PM
Congrats on a great win, Robin! Hugs.. Arlene
Nehls Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 6:03 AM
Are you kidding me, Robin. A horse. Must be Mr. ED, He could do all that stuff, and he was quite a singer. This was a fun one, my friend and I loved it.... Robert.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 11:20 PM
a horse?? you crazy lady. this was a crazy fun filled ride. Gosh, I lose track of poets so quickly when i get busy. Good thing I stopped by the new poems by poets list tonight!!
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