A Full Moon As If Oil


sky cracked
hunchback

window
spills glow

fades bed
moon wed

nighttime
bars line

sleep tears
sleep fears

brim full
hollow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 9:11 AM
I really enjoyed this series of footles that had got past me somehow!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:39 PM
outstanding imagery with a hint of sadness
Daniels Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 10:20 PM
Gold class, Imagery ! “Sky cracked/hunchback” : this is genius, Dear Poet. Have to fav. What remains is for you to introspect DNA, before getting to spiritual DNA ( the whiffs of innuendos that flit in & out. ) Have a splendid New Year’s Eve, Hun.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Hope that oil is a healing ointment. Blessings and warm hugs.
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