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A Full Eyeful Exchanged

What a world this is becoming so much to concern any old soul dangers abound wherever you turn where are the good times let 'em roll Is there anybody willing to stand strong? even just one to give an open eye of course in exchange for the other but without one, you might die What can one see without an eye? all is a blur held in darkness imagine everyone in such a state like a room painted in blackness The consequences of a whole world that's left behind with no sign of light searching in all the wrong places indeed what an awful plight We all will leave this world one day at a time all unknown both our eyes will close at last these worlds point to endless zone

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Date: 3/30/2019 3:22:00 AM
This is a wonderful message Gordon which we should all take heed off, as humans we sometimes forget how vulnerable we are and how ready we should be. I don't know if I am, I hope so! Poetry hugs, Jenny.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 3/30/2019 3:59:00 AM
Thanks Jenny, Glad you liked it and indeed we all need to be ready but as long as our trust is in the Lord we will be safely assured. Have a blessed and safe weekend, Gordon

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