Eddie Merritt Poet Rhyme

A Freestyle Spur of the Moment Thing

Dazed n confused
Not knowing how to help if its not spoken of too
Expressing is like a suggestion of how deep its roots
Dazed n confused 
Not knowing how to help if rooted out too
Just feeling bruised
n stripped arms split blood drips n thrown in a hole left to the wolves
Knowing better tho 
Just mentioning the motion of emotions felt while being being bum-rushed by scars that were produced
Silently roaring the proof
Dazed n confused
A lil gesture of consideration returned n provoked concern
Dazed n confused 
Thoughts of smothering n tryin too hard put aside for questions of relevance that are shown why they are 
yurned
What's the answer in return 
Nothin
Dazed n confused
Wearing fortified gear ready for anything anyone or something
Dazed n confused
Not ever ready to give up just not knowing what to do...Peace

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2011 at 11:16 AM I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Eddie. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

Kara Mclain May 18, 2011 at 4:06 AM This is a very attention grabbing piece, though a little scattered and, for lack of a better word, confusing.