A Freestyle Poem

I'm curse with pride the golden child surrounded by scream and cries.

Standing tall I refuse cry speaking the truth I don't believe in lies.

Raise in the streets but yet I still can't stand the heat my mind wondering I'm in too deep.

Right now my words is my only drive I'm ducking death so through the night I creep.

Carrying the world on my back the heart of a G standing tall while I face my enemies.

And because of my pride you will always remember me.

Because I believe in loyalty so I will always represent for my family.

Cause to me their love is like heaven to touch and I need  their energy.

But why is this world fill with misery why can't we live together in unity.

It's time for a change and we can start by changing our community.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/17/2009 3:22:00 PM
Im Ducking Death--> ^..^ wows... Very Deep Right here-->Gone to My Favs:)
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Date: 6/9/2009 9:27:00 AM
Amazing. You Could Rap I Bet. Anyday Any Time. Your Words Flow Smooth As Silk. Never Give Up. Peace. Booboo
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Date: 4/28/2009 4:33:00 PM
This is an important poem because of your insight. We can change our communities by changing our families and we can only change our families by changing the way each individuaol relates to one another...positively...and sometimes that takes practice. I really liked your poem. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 4/26/2009 10:09:00 PM
Carrying the world on your back is a heavy load. Wish we could bring positive change to the world community as well as our personal relationships. Love the poem, Dion
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:59:00 PM
Very good write...hope to read more from you.
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:32:00 PM
this is realy good, Great job:)
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