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A Four Line Rhyme

I slid down a hill that was covered in slime I almost kept going, but I stopped on a dime To get back to the top is a hell of a climb I would do it all over, but I'm all out of time

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Casarah Nance

Date: 6/6/2014 3:08:00 PM

*chuckle* a cute little poem, glad I stopped by to read it, Miss ya Roger, hope you can get inspired soon and write us some more. :)

Roger Horsch
Date: 6/8/2014 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Casarah, I miss you too. I hope I can get inspired soon. I have dry spells at times where I don't have anything to write.......Hugs......Roger

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/22/2013 7:06:00 PM

Fun write. : ) Hugs, Juliet.

Roger Horsch
Date: 1/9/2014 11:18:00 AM

I love to right things that are fun. It 's nice to hear from you today Juliet, Hugs back to you to.....Roger

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2013 6:05:00 PM

weeee! Roger, this one is super cool. I don't know about the slime. hahaha, by the way, the climb does sound mighty dangerous. xox..Linda

Roger Horsch
Date: 12/8/2013 6:15:00 PM

Your so silly....Roger

Robin Davis

Date: 12/6/2013 4:40:00 PM

Roger what a cute and silly write. Makes the reader smile and chuckle with delight. Nice job my friend Sorry you almost cried with my Too Young poem. Thanks for the nice comment.

Roger Horsch
Date: 12/6/2013 5:17:00 PM

It's a good thing to be silly every once in a while. Thanks Robin....Roger

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/6/2013 12:26:00 PM

Clever work here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Roger Horsch
Date: 12/6/2013 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Matthew, It was fun to write.....Roger

Joseph Sergi

Date: 11/23/2013 9:44:00 AM

nice poem seems just like life sometimes

Roger Horsch
Date: 11/23/2013 9:48:00 AM

Thanks Joseph, I agree, It Does seem like life sometimes....Roger

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2013 5:34:00 PM

Cute one got a chuckle about this one..I feel that is about something deeper though about life and how we have a mountain to climb and sometimes that mountain is a slippery slope..Robert Frost wrote a poem called "Brown's Descent"..You might enjoy reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your visit delighted me..Sara

Roger Horsch
Date: 12/1/2013 1:23:00 PM

Thank you Sara, I got a chuckle writing it. I looked up and read the poem titled " Brown's Descent " and it was a wonderful poem. Thank you again for pointing that out...Your friend...Hugs...Roger

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/17/2013 6:31:00 PM

Awww to be that young again LOL. Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

Roger Horsch
Date: 11/18/2013 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Debbie, I will try to read more of your poems when I can. Roger

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2013 5:45:00 PM

this is FANTASTIC. Love how you did your entry.

Roger Horsch
Date: 11/16/2013 7:27:00 AM

Your too kind Andrea, But thank you