A Four Line Rhyme

I slid down a hill that was covered in slime
I almost kept going, but I stopped on a dime
To get back to the top is a hell of a climb
I would do it all over, but I'm all out of time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nance Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 3:08 PM
*chuckle* a cute little poem, glad I stopped by to read it, Miss ya Roger, hope you can get inspired soon and write us some more. :)
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June 8, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Casarah, I miss you too. I hope I can get inspired soon. I have dry spells at times where I don't have anything to write.......Hugs......Roger
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December 22, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Fun write. : ) Hugs, Juliet.
Horsch Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 11:18 AM
I love to right things that are fun. It 's nice to hear from you today Juliet, Hugs back to you to.....Roger
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December 8, 2013 at 6:05 PM
weeee! Roger, this one is super cool. I don't know about the slime. hahaha, by the way, the climb does sound mighty dangerous. xox..Linda
Horsch Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 6:15 PM
Your so silly....Roger
Davis Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Roger what a cute and silly write. Makes the reader smile and chuckle with delight. Nice job my friend Sorry you almost cried with my Too Young poem. Thanks for the nice comment.
Horsch Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 5:17 PM
It's a good thing to be silly every once in a while. Thanks Robin....Roger
Anish Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Clever work here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Horsch Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Matthew, It was fun to write.....Roger
Sergi Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 9:44 AM
nice poem seems just like life sometimes
Horsch Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Joseph, I agree, It Does seem like life sometimes....Roger
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November 22, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Cute one got a chuckle about this one..I feel that is about something deeper though about life and how we have a mountain to climb and sometimes that mountain is a slippery slope..Robert Frost wrote a poem called "Brown's Descent"..You might enjoy reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your visit delighted me..Sara
Horsch Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Sara, I got a chuckle writing it. I looked up and read the poem titled " Brown's Descent " and it was a wonderful poem. Thank you again for pointing that out...Your friend...Hugs...Roger
Guzzi Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 6:31 PM
Awww to be that young again LOL. Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
Horsch Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 2:22 PM
Thanks Debbie, I will try to read more of your poems when I can. Roger
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 5:45 PM
this is FANTASTIC. Love how you did your entry.
Horsch Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Your too kind Andrea, But thank you
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