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A Forecast For Frost

~A Spring Haiku~ one little raindrop.. a bud on a branch calls.. chills send it away.. sunrays lightly spill.. a blade of grass stretches out.. forecast is for frost..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2011 8:00:00 PM

Well I changed my title from Compadres to Amigos... which do u like Michael?

Sarah Comstock

Date: 3/22/2011 1:58:00 PM

very nice micheal

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/21/2011 8:01:00 PM

Dr. Ram says name on poem is 'voluntary'.. so I added my name to my entry Michael.. told u I'd let u know luv.. J..G. looking out for her W.K.... hi to lady fair..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/21/2011 2:54:00 PM

Well I just asked Dr. Ram it we had to type our name on the poem.. no response just yet but I do not recall it being one of his rules.. am sure it is OK to leave it there luv.. soon as he replies will get back to u my W.K. ..J.G. in question mode..haha..

Crystal Wilkins

Date: 3/21/2011 11:52:00 AM

lovely imaginary here! paints a beautiful picture, thank you for your comment! I really appreciate!

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/21/2011 9:10:00 AM

Truly gorgeous. Damn nice job!

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/21/2011 8:59:00 AM

Stunning images Michael, you will probably embrace Spring with open arms when she reveals herself hey? enjoyed this... love W

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 7:38:00 PM

Flowers are confused at this time of year ..eagerly awaiting Spring but the chill of Winter still surrounds.. wonderful insight into the blade of grass stretching..luv that.. only to find it is still cold .. but your words so warm Michael... your Jersey Girl in Springtime mode forever and always with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2011 4:45:00 PM

Cute observation nicely worded for a forecast for frost, Michael

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/20/2011 3:00:00 PM

Very well done! Nice imagery with this haiku! Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2011 2:26:00 PM

The blades and the buds are but victims of the season's fickle weather, Michael. The bud may succumb for the season, but the blade of grass will rise again when the frost is gone. I'd gladly trade places with you. It is already getting a tad too warm here. Awesome description of Mother Nature's power to fool even her own plants. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2011 2:21:00 PM

hmmm, that hanger-on winter just won't let go! So I take it you are still not seeing spring!! But she WILL be here soon, I just know it. Thanks for posting this little set of haiku,Michael!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/20/2011 1:36:00 PM

Nice to see a spring Haiku. It is snowing again today just as we thought we were into spring. Have a great day. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2011 12:30:00 PM

Great one..Very descriptive of the time of year...The gray clouds are amassed and the pollen like a winter's blizzard falls just outside my door..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/20/2011 10:11:00 AM

delightful expression of anticipation of a season that blooms, much like this plump piece , michael... i'm a 'ku fan; this set is amazing!! more!! :) huggs, nette

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/20/2011 10:07:00 AM

Inspired by my 35 degree wake up temps.. and the forecast for flurries tonight... 1st day of spring , I think not...