Jeff Kyser Poet Footle

A Footle Do, 40 Days, a Bit Much

Remark:
Build ark

Rain, hark
Embark!

Aardvarks?
No sharks!

Big spark
One lark

It’s dark
Landmark!

Let’s park
Debark

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for the A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest
sponsored by Brian Strand
written 10/13/22

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Christuraj Alex October 17, 2022 at 8:09 PM Great footle with K rhyme. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman October 17, 2022 at 1:08 PM Jeff congratulations to you for your win with this delightful recounting of the Noah story in fine footle! I think kids would just love this one done with clapping and rhythmic instruments! Blessings to you. Still in my thoughts and prayers. Jeff Kyser October 17, 2022 at 6:42 PM Ha, that would be fun. I think we could expand it a bit and add a bunch of other footless to get the animals loaded

Sara Kendrick October 17, 2022 at 7:58 AM Congratulations on your footles being on the winners' list in Brian's contest. These are not so easy to do. Way to go. Sara Jeff Kyser October 17, 2022 at 8:06 AM Thanks, Sara - footles are fun, but I had a hard time coming up with that many that all rhymed with 'ark' :-)

Line Gauthier October 16, 2022 at 6:20 PM Those forty days passed in a flash ~

Becky Forbes October 13, 2022 at 2:35 PM Love how you couldn't decide on a title! (and the poem too - of course) Jeff Kyser October 13, 2022 at 3:26 PM titles, lol, I always have troubles with those!

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2022 at 10:27 AM LOVE it!! that's how to footle Jeff Kyser October 13, 2022 at 10:29 AM thanks, Andrea. fun format!