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A Footle Do, 40 Days, a Bit Much

Remark: Build ark Rain, hark Embark! Aardvarks? No sharks! Big spark One lark It’s dark Landmark! Let’s park Debark ---------- for the A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand written 10/13/22

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Date: 10/17/2022 8:09:00 PM
Great footle with K rhyme. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/17/2022 1:08:00 PM
Jeff congratulations to you for your win with this delightful recounting of the Noah story in fine footle! I think kids would just love this one done with clapping and rhythmic instruments! Blessings to you. Still in my thoughts and prayers.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/17/2022 6:42:00 PM
Ha, that would be fun. I think we could expand it a bit and add a bunch of other footless to get the animals loaded
Date: 10/17/2022 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your footles being on the winners' list in Brian's contest. These are not so easy to do. Way to go. Sara
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/17/2022 8:06:00 AM
Thanks, Sara - footles are fun, but I had a hard time coming up with that many that all rhymed with 'ark' :-)
Date: 10/16/2022 6:20:00 PM
Those forty days passed in a flash ~
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Date: 10/13/2022 2:35:00 PM
Love how you couldn't decide on a title! (and the poem too - of course)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/13/2022 3:26:00 PM
titles, lol, I always have troubles with those!
Date: 10/13/2022 10:27:00 AM
LOVE it!! that's how to footle
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/13/2022 10:29:00 AM
thanks, Andrea. fun format!

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