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A Fool In Love

You come home late
		and broke again
		and once again
		I let you in

		You lay around
		while I do the work
		and once again
		I clean and curse

		You look for me to pay the bills
		and once again
		I say I will 

		You turn to me to clean your clothes
		and once again 
		I wash all loads

		What’s wrong with me
		am I a fool
		cause once again
		I excuse your mood

		There’s more to love that meets the eye
		It’s hard for a heart in love to die
		I must move on - I always say
		but once again you have your way

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Pace Ink-U-Script

June 29, 2016 at 8:11 PM

Congrats on the feature....marriage and relationships can be very difficult to get out of. It seems as if those that are outside looking in have all the answers....great poem!

Skat A

April 19, 2016 at 11:37 PM

Judy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Manmath Dalei

April 17, 2016 at 11:47 PM

Hi Judy, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Poet Destroyer A

April 17, 2016 at 11:22 PM

Judy Gaines, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@