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A Foggy Morn

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 Fog's mist gently touched enveloping body_ sudden light spirit enlivened



Sponsor: Broken Wings
Contest: Monoku Form
Date: December 4, 2013

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Skat A

March 15, 2014 at 10:16 AM

Sara .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

D.W. Rodgers

March 13, 2014 at 9:17 AM

Well done, it brings back my one visit to Torrey Pines. I was still on EST and was up at dawn on my morning run, going past the green golf course to the point with the sea mist thick around me.

Richard Lamoureux

March 12, 2014 at 8:51 AM

Lovely, congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2014 at 5:12 PM

way to go, sara, Congats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2014 at 4:54 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

March 10, 2014 at 3:52 PM

Congratulations on your fine win ,Sarah!! ..what a beautiful picture at this poem.. ^__^

Robin Davis

January 31, 2014 at 5:16 PM

Sara What a pretty and serene write. You caught the readers attention in so few words. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Cherished Love poem

Jack Horne

December 18, 2013 at 4:27 PM

love this one - a sure winner

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

December 8, 2013 at 9:01 PM

A nice Monoku for the contest. Best wishes.

Joseph Matose

December 8, 2013 at 2:01 AM

GREAT MONOKU. I'LL ATTEMPT A MONOKU FOR THE FIRST TIME AFTER READING YOURS. THANKS FOR THE INSPIRATION. FRIEND, JM

Cherl Dunn

December 6, 2013 at 6:14 PM

Short but yet sweet, enjoyed! cheri and thanks for your comments on my recent poems. have a great hoilday. again cheri

Joe Maverick

December 6, 2013 at 12:44 PM

It must have been the lighest of fogs to lighten the mood so Sara, I do enjoy the very different feels and scenes in creation..' this inspires thoughts and memories..'