Thabang Ngoma Poet Haiku

A Fluorescent Flag

A besieged torrent
Unveils a rainbow nation 
Fluorescent smiles


Thabang Ngoma
16-07-2015

South Africa

Sponsor: SKAT A 
Contest Name: In 3 lines, represent your Country or State flag

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Poet Destroyer A July 27, 2015 at 9:05 PM Thabang, Congratulations on your awesome win. every poem has been an honor to read. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2015 at 11:08 PM this is a really pretty one!! Love the idea of it being fluorescent. Congrats on the winners' list!

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 9:04 AM lovely write Thabang:-) my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 23, 2015 at 11:09 PM Wonderful haiku Thabang that depicts ur love for the country n flag! Congrats on big win!

Skat A July 23, 2015 at 7:53 PM Congratulations, tHABANG :) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS, It's an honor to have your haiku in my contest. Forever **SKAT** Thabang Ngoma July 23, 2015 at 9:01 PM Hi Skatie...thank you. Haiku is such an explosive form of expression and entering your contests has taught me so much about this literature...I hope my national pride shines through (:heers, Tbang