Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

A Fluffy Pillow For My Head

A fluffy pillow for my head,
my doggie curled up at my feet,
and large soft quilts upon me spread.
A fluffy pillow for my head
and  I’m tucked cozily in bed.
Tonight my dreams will all be sweet.
A fluffy pillow at my head;
my doggie curled up at my feet.

For Carol Brown's FLUFF Poetry Contest

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Debbie Duncan September 3, 2015 at 2:00 AM This is very cute. Glad you liked my She Ask :)

Robin Davis December 30, 2013 at 8:37 AM Andrea This poem makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. I want to be cuddled up with a furry four legged friend, soft pillow and blankie. Now I want to go back to bed. LOL Thanks for the awesome and amazing comment on my Changing World poem Hugs

Erich Goller February 17, 2012 at 9:47 PM That's a lovely story poem, Congratulation on your win,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2012 at 2:31 AM OH!..MY... EVERY WHERE..I LOOK... IT'S YOU..LOL.. CONGRATS... YOUR SUPER DESERVE IT.. WISH I HAD YOUR TALENT... FEELING A BIT LOOPY... ANWAYS... YOUR A SUPER POET ALWAYS...PD

Carol Sunshine Brown February 10, 2012 at 12:18 PM Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 10, 2012 at 7:50 AM congrats Andrea on an excellent win for this lovely fluff poetry luv.. a wow wonder too..

David Williams February 10, 2012 at 2:15 AM Andrea congrats on your win, liked it..David

Carrie Richards February 9, 2012 at 8:15 PM Sounds cozy and the perfect way to spend the evening!! Love it! Congratulations, Andrea~!

Ralph Taylor February 9, 2012 at 6:21 PM Congrats, Andrea. Outstanding write. Enjoyed. Great job. luv Ralph

Lizanne Scholtz February 9, 2012 at 4:43 PM Congratulations on your win Andrea, love Elizabeth

Sadaf Syed February 3, 2012 at 11:23 AM Nice:)A pillow is really important for a good night sleep! And as of now i'm picking up my own fluffy pillow.. good night:)

Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2012 at 10:32 PM I saw this contest and drew a blank. What a great job you did on it. Wonderful Andrea.

Jack Horne February 2, 2012 at 1:27 PM Aww, sweet piece indeed, my friend

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 2, 2012 at 10:56 AM This one is such a sweet write and just really cozy-- hmm now I somehow miss having a dog-- :(.... Very cute write, Andrea! :) hugs to you! Shucks, it just occurred to me, it's been awhile since I last wrote a triolet, you write these things so well!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 2, 2012 at 8:48 AM awww how cute and cuddly Andrea.. I seem to do the same with Venus.. haha.. luv the form used ..good luck in the contest.. how is all going???

Poet Destroyer A February 1, 2012 at 8:29 PM Andrea,,Good luck in the contest,,enjoyed stopping by tonight~ ;-) always,..pd.

Elizabeth Wesley February 1, 2012 at 4:53 PM Lots of fluff in this to dream on Andrea, a great entry for the contest with my best wishes. Saw Arild's sweet poem for you! :)

Gwendolen Song February 1, 2012 at 4:07 PM Can I borrow that fluffy pillow of yours?...sounds amazing..the poem is wonderful and such a great form to display!! Oh yeah!! Off to work,..Gwendolen

Daver Austin February 1, 2012 at 2:30 PM This is real Mother Goose stuff, and I LOVE Mother Goose. I suppose you'd call it idealized Mother Goose. Some of the rhymes have sinister origins. Nothing sinister about this one - makes me feel all nice and warm. Love, daver

Lizanne Scholtz February 1, 2012 at 12:58 PM this is cute Andrea, good luck in the contest. Elizabeth

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2012 at 11:26 AM awhh, andie... nothing like a sweet fluff of a pet.. this is such an engaging write; i like.. congrats on your win in my contest; great phrasing, whoot!...:) huggs!

Russell Sivey February 1, 2012 at 10:37 AM Beautiful, I really do love this write my friend! Don't you just love fluffy pillows? I do! I miss my sweet puppy that slept between my legs where it was warm! Wonderful poem! Awesome Work!

The Situation February 1, 2012 at 10:13 AM a real stickler for the rules.

Bl Devnath February 1, 2012 at 9:39 AM Wonderful Fluffy Pillow, expecting sweet dreams at night,loved and enjoyed. Thanks for your comment on my write. Best wishes for the contest,bl

Dinda Minardi February 1, 2012 at 8:31 AM You made fluffy pillow as a poetic subject for triolet. greatly written, Andrea. Thanks for your kind comments.. hugs, dinda.

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