Get Your Premium Membership

A Flowering Night

Snatch Taken In the dead of night Run Hide Stay out of sight Hurry Faster Get out straightaway Longer Farther Still a distance away Stop Breathe While there is time Movement Tension Keep on the climb Flee Leave So you can be free Advance Arrive “You’ve made it finally” Crush Mix “I knew you wouldn’t quit” Cup Drink “The trip was worth it” Settle Cuddle “To help you stay healthy and alive” Written on November 5, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/12/2021 8:44:00 PM
I love the rhythm that you created in this poem. Well done and congrats Dylan!
Login to Reply
Ravenclaw Avatar
Dylan Ravenclaw
Date: 4/13/2021 5:00:00 PM
Thank you! I liked writing this poem and I'm glad you enjoyed it, too! Thank you again for reading!
Date: 4/11/2021 9:24:00 PM
Wow, Dylan! What a lively, racy poem! Congrats on your win!
Login to Reply
Ravenclaw Avatar
Dylan Ravenclaw
Date: 4/13/2021 4:59:00 PM
Thank you! Thank you again for reading!
Date: 4/11/2021 12:16:00 PM
Dylan, your short staccato lines enhance the urgency of the poem. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Login to Reply
Ravenclaw Avatar
Dylan Ravenclaw
Date: 4/11/2021 8:43:00 PM
Thank you! I wanted to try a different format and the poem just came out. Thank you again for reading!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things