Dylan Ravenclaw Poet Rhyme

A Flowering Night

Snatch
Taken
In the dead of night
Run
Hide
Stay out of sight
Hurry
Faster
Get out straightaway
Longer
Farther
Still a distance away
Stop
Breathe
While there is time
Movement
Tension
Keep on the climb
Flee
Leave
So you can be free
Advance
Arrive
“You’ve made it finally”
Crush
Mix
“I knew you wouldn’t quit”
Cup
Drink
“The trip was worth it”
Settle
Cuddle
“To help you stay healthy and alive”

Written on November 5, 2020

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George Yiorgos Stathakis April 12, 2021 at 8:44 PM I love the rhythm that you created in this poem. Well done and congrats Dylan! Dylan Ravenclaw April 13, 2021 at 5:00 PM Thank you! I liked writing this poem and I'm glad you enjoyed it, too! Thank you again for reading!

Unseeking Seeker April 11, 2021 at 9:24 PM Wow, Dylan! What a lively, racy poem! Congrats on your win! Dylan Ravenclaw April 13, 2021 at 4:59 PM Thank you! Thank you again for reading!

Kim Merryman April 11, 2021 at 12:16 PM Dylan, your short staccato lines enhance the urgency of the poem. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Dylan Ravenclaw April 11, 2021 at 8:43 PM Thank you! I wanted to try a different format and the poem just came out. Thank you again for reading!