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A FLOCK OF SEAGULLS

A blanket of turquoise and sapphire blue;
cacophonous gray and white plumage sail.
Skimming along the sea’s light foamy hue;
a blanket of turquoise and sapphire blue.
Beauty in flight, soaring the sky’s vast view;
they flock together on a grander scale.
A blanket of turquoise and sapphire blue;
cacophonous gray and white plumage sail.

A blanket of turquoise and sapphire blue;
skimming along the sea’s light foamy hue.
Beauty in flight, soaring the sky’s vast view;
they flock together on a grander scale.
Cacophonous gray and white plumage sail;
ascending high on a heavenly trail.
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Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 2:01 PM
Love your first post. Just curious was cutting the second stanza two lines short deliberate. You could create a new triolet form!
Gondolf Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 4:29 AM
You have painted a beautiful image with your words , Kahlani, nicely done. Welcome to Poetry Soup. John
Steele Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 4:33 AM
Thank you, John, for your kind words.
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