A Flock

A flock of Blackbirds visited 
They fed on cracked acorns
And left well filled; a few Robins 
Ate as each one returned

Two Blackbirds came to drink water
From the local shared fount 
Which each day slowly gets lower
On these dry days their haunt

Finis'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kerr Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 12:33 AM
Imaginative poem, Sara. The subtle descriptions of birds eating patterns and thirst quenching quite creative. Of course that nuanced teasing end line I love. Howard
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July 22, 2026 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, Howard. That was the way it was because we were in a drought. Your visits are encouraging and uplifting. Sara K.
Sibanda Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Lovely poem.
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 6:28 AM
Why, thank you, Ndaba. I appreciate your visit and kind review. Sara K.
Jones Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 10:10 PM
Beautiful Sara...I can't keep either my bird feeder or bird bath filled right now...crazy...hope you are well and blessed..Donna
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March 22, 2013 at 8:05 AM
It is beautiful, Sara - I'm looking for signs of spring and listening for birdsong. - But winter and frost is still here. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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March 22, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Images that blossom like spring..hugs always Michael
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March 21, 2013 at 10:29 PM
Hello Sara, your poems are always filled with the perfect imagery when it comes to nature... lovely...Linda
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March 21, 2013 at 7:51 PM
I am a rare breed my friend, I like those black birds, especially the raven! I have been so enthralled by the Edgar Allan Poe's work, The Raven that I have loved this color of bird...even though they are disgusting! Your poem is exquisite Sara, I love reading it this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great work!!
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March 21, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Lovely poem here Sara, must agree, they are fun and satisfying to watch. I think birds are one of natures greatest gifts. Thank you for looking in on my work. Take care, Regards Richard
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March 21, 2013 at 5:58 PM
It's fun to see them in their flocks. I think it is called congregations, something like that? Nice one, Sara.
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