A Fleeting Love

As time flies by, I keep asking why
your love for me happened to die.
I can’t understand how I failed to satisfy
your needs, your wants and your desires.
For my endless love for you never seemed to tire.

Maybe it was me trying to electrify
you’re every idea of total fantasy.
Or was it my lack of sympathy.
O please, O Please let me rectify,
my previous disregard of sincere empathy.

Let me hold your heart so gracefully
and provide you total serenity.
I’m here; I’m here to hold you tenderly.
To give you what you desire and need.
Please guide me back with sympathy
where you want me and I am supposed to be.

I know, I know you believe it’s over
And I tend to believe you but please
Allow me to a second chance to appease.
For I believe our love is something more
Than just a passing attempt for us to agree
our love has ultimately come to bore.

For there is no way our love is done
Cause after all is said and done I have only begun.
I’m sorry your heart has taken its leave
So maybe it is time for us to grieve
But I happen to believe and tend to agree
That your soul still believes in me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 6/5/2011 7:42:00 AM
i really like this poem, very true of how love can die one side of a relationship
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