A Flame

a flame in dark room
                                           may not be enough to light 
                                                  to send away dark

                                             dark becomes more dark
                                            as soon as it dies there in
                                                    in it no dark sure

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/15/2014 5:13:00 PM

Nice poem Bi. I hate the dark. So I have a night light. The flame in your heart should never go out. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/16/2014 1:22:00 AM

Many thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/14/2014 12:15:00 PM

blazing like your mystical world, bl.. nicely portrayed!.. huggs

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/15/2014 3:01:00 AM

Thanks a lot to lot for reading my write and for your nice comment, my lovely friend. Thanks of saying my world is mystical. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 10:53:00 AM

BL., i like this, it reminds me to get a bigger flame... After all, I do not like the dark... love it..Linda

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/14/2014 11:13:00 AM

In these days certainly all will miss you and feel empty somewhere in PS, without any doubt. I will miss extremely because you are my top best friend. Okay, enjoy the vacation from every spheres. God always bless you. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/13/2014 11:16:00 AM

Oh amazing, like your poetry bi, that lights up the soup.....

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/14/2014 1:32:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your valuable uplifting comment and honor. You are Genius always every one in the PS knows well. Your words always inspires me a lot. Thanks, loved always, bl