Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

A Flame

a flame in dark room
                                           may not be enough to light 
                                                  to send away dark

                                             dark becomes more dark
                                            as soon as it dies there in
                                                    in it no dark sure

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Lucilla Carrillo January 15, 2014 at 5:13 PM Nice poem Bi. I hate the dark. So I have a night light. The flame in your heart should never go out. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Bl Devnath January 16, 2014 at 1:22 AM Many thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud January 14, 2014 at 12:15 PM blazing like your mystical world, bl.. nicely portrayed!.. huggs Bl Devnath January 15, 2014 at 3:01 AM Thanks a lot to lot for reading my write and for your nice comment, my lovely friend. Thanks of saying my world is mystical. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A January 14, 2014 at 10:53 AM BL., i like this, it reminds me to get a bigger flame... After all, I do not like the dark... love it..Linda Bl Devnath January 14, 2014 at 11:13 AM In these days certainly all will miss you and feel empty somewhere in PS, without any doubt. I will miss extremely because you are my top best friend. Okay, enjoy the vacation from every spheres. God always bless you. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Harry Horsman January 13, 2014 at 11:16 AM Oh amazing, like your poetry bi, that lights up the soup..... Bl Devnath January 14, 2014 at 1:32 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your valuable uplifting comment and honor. You are Genius always every one in the PS knows well. Your words always inspires me a lot. Thanks, loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2014 at 9:35 AM - Lots of light and a lot of heat. . . . faith and hope .... we will need, bl. - well written like always ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath January 12, 2014 at 10:53 AM Thanks always....................... my lovely friend. Loved always, bl