A Fish's Viewpoint

Undersea exploration comes to me in my dreams
As a fish in the deep I see only faint sunbeams

Enough light there is to reveal a lost continent
I wonder what led to this golden age’s descent

Colorful fish swim among ruins of a pyramid
A former city’s gilded streets, giant squid now float amid

Huge, submerged statues of gods suddenly catch my eye
Just as a fish-tailed, sweet mermaid happens to swim by

Stroking through the water as sea plants flourish below
Unquenchable curiosity continues to grow

Is this Atlantis?  Am I on the Bimini Road?
Buildings here have cryptic writings I cannot decode

Schools of many other fish are surrounding me now
Are they wondering too?  Or just seeking plankton chow?

When I awake in my bed, the sheets are soaking wet
And my body is writhing in a chilling night sweat

The sights I had seen provoked deep-founded fears
The North Pole is said to shift every ten thousand years

That time is approaching; may I return to the sea?
Let me dwell in the ocean as landlubbers flee

The earth rises and sinks on a regular basis
Only in the ocean will I find my oasis




*For Gautami’s “In the Deep Sea” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 6:15 PM
I saw you commenting to someone how your poems were similar. they sure are,CArolyn. Very nicely done. Congrats to you.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 2:57 AM
Nice take on this , congratulations Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 1:27 AM
congrats Carolyn on a wonderful write and well deserved win for this rare beauty.. from a fishing expert too.. how amazing u are.. happy easter blessings too luv..
Guzzi Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 6:55 PM
I'd love to see the Bimini road! Congrad's on your win!
Phookan Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 4:00 PM
Skillful writing,, quite unique with a different approach. Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami
Horne Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 8:46 AM
I love this imaginative piece, my friend. A great one for the book
Austin Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 3:00 PM
You know what Edgar Cayce said. The West Coast will go under water - something like that. Great to read one of your favorite topics. Don't get caught in The Bell Chamber. hardy harr harr. Love, daver
Horsman Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 3:58 PM
I love your themes on Atlantis, this is a remarkable poem, enjoyed, Oh you are a fish, i must hone my fishing skill up. harry
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March 12, 2012 at 9:02 PM
what's a Bimini Road? will google that. I enjoy this poem alot, ocean is another world. good luck on the contest Carolyn
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