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A Fine State of Affairs

A Fine State of Affairs A fine state of affairs Leads to walking upstairs A long endless tunnel I have to find funnel A fine state of affairs Don’t want to find bears lair Now I’m finding my own Into another zone A fine state of affairs Happy to be aware Need the love of children May adopt eleven I’m finally aware A fine state of affairs. Evie

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Maria Williams

Date: 3/26/2018 8:53:00 AM

Welcome to PS Evie. A lovely poem....Maria

Evie Cw
Date: 3/26/2018 6:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment and especially welcoming to PS.... have a great day.

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2018 7:28:00 AM

Great first post Evie, welcome to poetry soup..

Evie Cw
Date: 3/26/2018 6:45:00 PM

Thank you so very much Silent One, I so totally enjoyed reading some of your great writes of poetic charm. Also thank you so very much for welcoming me to poetry soup.

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/26/2018 6:10:00 AM

Methinks we're gonna get along just fine!!! WELCOME Evie... love and hugs, Happy Jack XOX

Evie Cw
Date: 3/26/2018 6:54:00 AM

Aww, you've really made my day a whole lot brighter... love and hugs, Happy Jack XOX.... Evie