A Final Breath

We take a final breath, Before you enter the world of the dead. I remember the night you said, That all you could see was a bright light and red. I know the pain will be over soon. And then you can soar like a released balloon. Fly way up high into the sky, Leaving the people who are questioning why. You're on to a better place. One that can be consumed in your loving grace. While we are here trying to chase, That balloon with your memory as it escapes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:12 PM
nice imagery! Welcome to the soup!
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August 26, 2010 at 9:31 AM
very caring good job
Sweetheart Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your very creative write .. there are many contests on the contest page .. u might want to check out and enter for more recognition of your poetry..luv..
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August 26, 2010 at 3:58 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Emilia. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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August 26, 2010 at 3:20 AM
W.O.W
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August 25, 2010 at 9:57 PM
a deep write, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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