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A Fighting Spirit

I must be bold and brave.
By not being stuck in yesterday.
And just dance on a wave.

Look fear in the eye is what I crave,
By letting courage have it's say.
I must be bold and brave.

I long to come out of insecurities cave.
Being victorious is the only way.
And just dance on a wave.

I want to be free before my grave.
Conquer my past  before I start to gray.
I must be bold and brave.

Farewell "fear" I'm done being your slave.
Be a warrior come what may.
And just dance on a wave. 

You took my self worth, but never gave.
A fighting spirit is what I now pray.
I must be bold and brave.
And just dance on a wave. 


7-8-16


Villanelle

A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).


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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:01 AM
I can't do these Alexis. Too much of a challenge for me. You did well! Congratulations on your on your third place win! 7 ; )
Williams Gault Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 9:16 AM
I have never tried this form, but you did wonders with it, such strength in a fighting spirit. Congratulations!
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Alexis, this is remarkable lady...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Alexis, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Alexis,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
Bordner Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Bravery can become a dangerous addiction fine Poetess...though for hearts like ours theres nothing else sweeter in the pulse. "I want to be free before my grave..." so you shall be Alexis...J.A.B.
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Alexis, wonderful words to focus on one step at a time for now and the future a 7. Thank you for reading “Mystery and Seclusion” and your very kind and very inspiriting words food for my soul. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Great job with villanelle form, Alexis. WAs this something you wanted to try for a challenge? It looks like you have done many before!
Y. Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you very much. Yes is something I wanted to challenge myself to do. It was my first attempt:-) Alexis
Worthy Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Awesome
Y. Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Hi Justin, Thank you very much.I'm glad you stopped by today:-) Alexis
Dutta Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 10:11 AM
That's the spirit. I totally agree with you and follow the same principle in life. lead your life best.
Espiritu Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:23 AM
Farewell "Fear"... hopefully i can do the same... nice poem... :)
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