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A Few More Miles Ahead of Time

I often wonder if it’s worth the effort with a keyboard or paper and pen to pour out my thoughts, heart, mind and soul from the ocean and rivers within The marrow in my bones hidden deep within these veins “This universe is a miracle,” I’ve heard Einstein once proclaimed Though admittedly, I’m not near his kind (far beyond my likes, by stars) I merely try to follow those I think know where they are A few more miles ahead of time “Out yonder,” my dad would say where I can only dream of writing a splendorous sonnet someday Or perchance a valediction poem a goodbye to the past or my rendition of a benediction thanking Hymn for all the love that lasts And open a few doors with some metaphors enjambment or anapest find inspiration from alliteration while striving towards my best Thus, here I rest in the morning air inhaling hope, exhaling despair as birds fly bye and gentle winds blow and pray more thoughts of beauty will flow © Terrell Martin, 02/25/2025

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Date: 3/24/2025 11:37:00 PM
Love a good rhyme, this is extraordinary. You really have a way with words.
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Date: 3/1/2025 12:47:00 PM
Terrell your words flow my friend and they are beautiful to read. Your poetry is at another level. I truly appreciate your thoughts in words. I am now getting back to commenting, I apologize to taking so long to do so. I am trying to catch up on everyone's poetry. You are an amazing Poet, I love the messages you send I am so delighted you are back posting. Your poetry I love reading...
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Date: 2/26/2025 3:18:00 PM
I love the way you write it reminds me a bit of my own style because we both seem to enjoy rhymes and sonnets. This gets a fave
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Date: 2/26/2025 3:52:00 PM
Andrea, you have no idea how much this means to me as I consider you a mentor and one of my favorites and most inspiring poets here in P/Soup. I also connect with your poetry as it often reminds me of my own and continue to aspire to your poetic standards. I feel I have a long way to go but your thoughts are both music to my ears and inspiration to keep trying. Thanks again /// Terrell
Date: 2/25/2025 7:00:00 PM
Terrell, you dont need to be an Einstein and who is except Einstein himself. Your poetry is always well written. Continue to write.
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Date: 2/25/2025 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, Oliver. I very much appreciate your sentiments and look forward to repaying your time and thoughts as well. Until then...Write on, Terrell
Date: 2/25/2025 3:36:00 PM
I believe you have many more lovely thoughts in your head just waiting to be written down, great poem Terrell :)
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Date: 2/26/2025 5:38:00 PM
With sincere apologies, Rose, I thought I had responded to this post earlier but apparently not. Many thanks for your optimism in my future writing capabilities which I will do my utmost to oblige. Thank you again for your time and uplifting, positive thoughts. Cheers to you, dear /// Terrell
Date: 2/25/2025 1:27:00 PM
My friend Terell, your marvelous poem captures the strain and thoughts of a writer on the worth of using poetry to express one's ideas and feelings. It highlights the desire to honor and pay tribute to the past, as well as the pursuit of beauty, meaning, and connection in the act writing.  such as "ocean and rivers within" allude to the richness and depth of feelings. Words like "marrow," "veins," and "universe" convey existential ideas and a sense of linkage with the wider universe. respect.
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Date: 2/25/2025 2:55:00 PM
One of the many things I love about you, Sir Sotto, is that you are never at a loss of time well spent with your fellow poets nor for a loss of deeply thoughtful, uplifting and sagacious words of encouragement. As always, I thank you for your intellect and kindness. Peace and Grace upon you my poetic friend /// Terrell

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