A Few Heartbeats

If Man dedicated a few of his heartbeats to love each day 

Heaven would not have remained from earth so far away!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
        24 May 2018

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Besma Riabi Dziri

May 24, 2018 at 12:55 PM

Your words and thoughts are composed gracefully in a brilliant couplet! You amaze both with words and wisdom.. Indeed, we gain paradise when Love reigns.. Insightful as always, stay blessed dear Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 25, 2018 at 2:21 PM

My dearest friend, Besma, thank you for your noble praise! It is certain your words reflect the goodness of your beautiful soul! God bless you as always!

Tom Cunningham

May 24, 2018 at 5:56 AM

How very true Demetrios, sadly with our present world heaven seems further away. Love overcomes all and sadly many will not pass through its gates. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 24, 2018 at 5:58 AM

Yes it is sad my friend, Tom! I am certain though that people like you will not have any trouble passing through the gates of heaven! Thank you !

Maria Williams

May 24, 2018 at 5:46 AM

Such wisdom in your poem. The energy given out in Love can bring about miracles. Look what you have created on your roof top garden, with your care,attention and love, you have created a little Heaven right there. Bravo my dearest friend, a definite fave....Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 24, 2018 at 5:54 AM

Only hearts who are filled with love can express themselves in the words you have written my dearest friend, Maria! God bless you you for the abundant contribution of love! God bless you! xxx