A Few Heartbeats

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" A FEW HEARTBEATS " PHOTO FROM MY ROOF GARDEN TAKEN BY ME. ©

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If Man dedicated a few of his heartbeats to love each day Heaven would not have remained from earth so far away! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 May 2018

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Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/24/2018 12:55:00 PM

Your words and thoughts are composed gracefully in a brilliant couplet! You amaze both with words and wisdom.. Indeed, we gain paradise when Love reigns.. Insightful as always, stay blessed dear Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2018 2:21:00 PM

My dearest friend, Besma, thank you for your noble praise! It is certain your words reflect the goodness of your beautiful soul! God bless you as always!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/24/2018 5:56:00 AM

How very true Demetrios, sadly with our present world heaven seems further away. Love overcomes all and sadly many will not pass through its gates. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/24/2018 5:58:00 AM

Yes it is sad my friend, Tom! I am certain though that people like you will not have any trouble passing through the gates of heaven! Thank you !

Maria Williams

Date: 5/24/2018 5:46:00 AM

Such wisdom in your poem. The energy given out in Love can bring about miracles. Look what you have created on your roof top garden, with your care,attention and love, you have created a little Heaven right there. Bravo my dearest friend, a definite fave....Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/24/2018 5:54:00 AM

Only hearts who are filled with love can express themselves in the words you have written my dearest friend, Maria! God bless you you for the abundant contribution of love! God bless you! xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/24/2018 5:31:00 AM

Excellent my friend, Demetrios--wisdom in every word.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/24/2018 5:40:00 AM

You so kind my good friend! A few of your many heartbeats you offer for love are more than enough for me! LOL!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2018 3:51:00 AM

- So true, a lovely thought my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/24/2018 5:25:00 AM

Thank you my dearest friend, Anne-Lise for your lovely comment! I know your love for your fellow Man is great! Hugs xx