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A feather on the wind

A feather on the wind Knowing no end Taken here and there By master no care Never had a choice Nor say in voice Live to be ruled by And never ask why A lie simple and clear Makes nothing dear

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Ink Empress

Date: 2/20/2025 6:45:00 AM

The cadence and rhythm of your word weaving here is so very lyrical and I absolutely love the way your poem flows and the last line speaks volumes! Pleasure reading you today! I must definitely read more of you! Sending you light today and always

Mohamed Omar
Date: 7/18/2025 9:37:00 AM

I have been away from the site . Sorry .Your words are blessings showerd with life. .I am honored to be in your divine writings . Best though you are Best .