A Father's Gift

Birth brings many gifts and life choices.
Man, woman, child each determined voices.
Who fathers the child, whose proverbial seed?
The mother known and the birth decreed.

Did he run, did he stay and if so why?
Who was the father who brought this sky?
Yes, he provided the seed, the roof
yet still this man stayed so.... aloof.

A presence was he when times were good
a missing link when greener pastures intrude.
He taught love and he taught fear
fear of loss, loss of him near.

He taught his daughters to mistrust all men
for who would not fail, if he did again and again?
He taught his daughters to be strong as men
and not to let others do as he did to them.

Who has most influenced my life?
Well father dear ‘was you caused such strife.
Father you've caused me the grief of form
Father it's you who have seen me born.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 7:32 PM
In the long run, some learn and some pass on the same. Depending on how you read this, it could be a tribute or a statement. Interesting write. Vince
Mehta Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 7:51 PM
A fine rhyming. A fine tribute. Congrats
Sweetheart Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in Moses contest.. an excellent write and special win for u to so enjoy .. see u at the winners circle..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Freeman Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Iam the most supprised to see that this is yours, I must say! However thanks for supporting my contest. Iam assuming this is Bio, and helps me to understand you a lot better! I hope you don't mind me saying this. "CONGRATULATIONS" Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Deb, did you have a dud father too? It really does make a difference in a woman's life, I think. Stanza three, did you mean loss? What have you been up to lately? Still on the "prowl" ? haha. I am out of here now. Gotta give my tax work to the tax guy and try to find some product at Petsmart to keep my damn Lilah vampira from peeing sometimes on the end of our bed. GRRRR. luv, andrea
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Deb. The last line, is that the earthly father or your Heavenly Father...just wondering. This poem...from the heart...rings. Smiles, Dane Ann
Goff Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 9:16 PM
revelations....poetically expressed, nice! jimbo
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