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A Faraway Place

As the sun was setting And the birds were in their nests A weary old lady Laid her head upon a pillow To take a short rest She was very tired And soon fell fast asleep She looked lovely and comfortable, Peaceful, tidy and neat. Her house was in order, Chores were all done She had written to friends and family, Acknowledging everyone. As she lay sleeping She looked so serene The silence was palpable, As if in a dream Suddenly a cock crowed, To welcome a new day The old lady never heard the cock She had quietly passed away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/16/2023 8:38:00 AM
Shirley what a beautiful beautiful poem…such a peaceful feel to it! I love this!! Debx
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Date: 6/14/2023 6:30:00 PM
What a way to go! Sounds like she planned it every step of the way.
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Date: 6/14/2023 12:23:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem. Sometimes I wish I could emulate her. Well done.
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