A Faraway Place

As the sun was setting
And the birds were in their nests
A weary old lady
Laid her head upon a pillow
To take a short rest

She was very tired
And soon fell fast asleep
She looked lovely and comfortable,
Peaceful, tidy and neat.

Her house was in order,
Chores were all done
She had written to friends and family,
Acknowledging everyone.

As she lay sleeping
She looked so serene
The silence was palpable,
As if in a dream

Suddenly a cock crowed,
To welcome a new day
The old lady never heard the cock
She had quietly passed away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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June 16, 2023 at 8:38 AM
Shirley what a beautiful beautiful poem…such a peaceful feel to it! I love this!! Debx
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June 14, 2023 at 6:30 PM
What a way to go! Sounds like she planned it every step of the way.
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June 14, 2023 at 12:23 AM
This is a wonderful poem. Sometimes I wish I could emulate her. Well done.
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