A Fantasy of Love

If I could script the fantasy of my own life to be
                                 with every word to find its home in my reality  
At first, I’d win the love, of course, in every drama’s plot
               and win the contest, win the prize, I’d rather win than not

I’d make the finest chocolates and I’d bake the finest cakes  
        I’d climb the highest mountains because I’d have what it takes
I’d please the mirror everyday with ample time to spare
                       for it would not take any time to style the finest hair

I’d eat of every noble plate from every land I find
                Yes, I could have it all and I could even change my mind
I’d sleep till noon, then have a drink with millions in the bank
       I’d swim and drive and ride my horse with no one else to thank

It’s then, that selfish thoughts of such an egotistic life
                           begin to pale in face of other’s monumental strife
So, how to end this fantasy with satisfaction spent
                     I’d write a final chapter and explain just what I meant

Love for all, the prize I’d seek with all to love me too
               and hunger banished from the world, disease to bid adieu
With everyone as beautiful and they could only be
                   with comforts of a well lived life for all the world to see
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Proxenos Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 8:39 AM
An inside look of you I see within this write, I feel the good in you and what is right, I enjoy browsing through your poetry, you question life and think and write creatively, may the New Year bring you and yours good cheer, and may any dream come true that you hold dear ! To Mike blessings Jennifer
Gentile Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 5:24 PM
Jennifer, that is so kind of you! I am so touched , thanks and may the new year bring you joy as well xxoo
Hawkins Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:37 PM
Very caring Poem. Too many people think that anything can be bought if you are rich enough to purchase it. Love is a feeling that is a priceless gift for us to share. Thank you, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:47 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words Shirley xxoo
M  Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:42 AM
That is truly wonderful poem Mike….I didn’t want it to end! Debx
Gentile Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 1:59 PM
Thanks so much Deb xxoo
Sands Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Sweet and powerful message this poem leads up to at the end. Well done Mike. Happy Monday :)
Gentile Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:44 AM
Happy Tuesday Heidi and thanks xxoo
Horsman Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 6:42 AM
I love your fantasy Mike, and the truth of the last stanza.
Gentile Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:43 AM
Thank you Harry !!!
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 4:12 AM
- A wonderful fantasy / or dream ... it's about enjoying life, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:43 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise xxxx
Awtry Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 10:08 PM
Jan's rollercoaster through your poem mirrors my own. I've decided to say my prayers for all mankind, then rummage through the kitchen for some chocolate :)
Gentile Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 3:30 AM
Sounds like a plan P.S., thanks !!!
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 3:08 PM
nothing wrong with dreaming... you hooked me in with making chocolates and cakes and I wondered when can I visit lol but the final stanza soo brought me down to earth:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 4:26 AM
You are always welcome, alas it is a fantasy and I cannot bake at all!!! Happy Sunday xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 7:31 AM
We're all guilty of having those thoughts Mike, but it would be wonderful if your last stanza came true for all mankind. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Gentile Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:22 AM
Thank so much Tom !!
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 6:04 AM
I like the divine message you convey in the ending of your poem, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Vijay !!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 5:18 AM
Love how you ended this after your egotistical fantasy came into focus. Your dream is for the whole world to experience all of life too.
Gentile Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 5:42 AM
Thanks Kim, Happy Saturday xxoo
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