A Fantasized Freedom

Away with the wind I went,
Beyond the deep skies to forget,
Soul healed, mind and heart,
Freed of my past at last.

I forgot that snow and rain,
Could return me to earth again.
I forgot that tears and pain,
My heart could never bargain.

I long for a touch of fire,
To awake me from this slumber.
These emotions I wish to retire,
They make me be just as bitter.
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April 8, 2025 at 11:05 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Nice poem ....Rachael Well penned.
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