A Families Love

We've had our ups and we've had our downs,
and maybe went a few rounds.
But in our hearts thats were we've been,
for together we will always win.
Though our families love might fill a little profound,
let me tell you it is more than abound.
Thus don't fret nor frown but only grin,
whereas we are here and are the best of kin.
Don't give up and stand your ground,
cause when you need us we'll always be around.
Find your strength from within,
so your adult life you can begin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lejeune Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 7:12 AM
Thanks I wrote that for my 21 year old cousin in July. She was in ICU on life support and they didn't know if she was going to make it. Thank God she did and is doing well now
Falotico Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 6:37 AM
Inspirational words my freind.. just change 3rd line harts to "Hearts' very good message sent out through the Soup...Michael
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