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A Fallen World

Lightning strikes again The flames dancing wildly It crumbles and falls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/21/2011 6:48:00 PM
Great write, what a great picture with words
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Date: 2/21/2011 5:41:00 PM
Nice imagery here Lesley.Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/21/2011 4:44:00 PM
Very descritive work..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2011 4:34:00 PM
Expressive haiku with nice images, Lesley
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