A Fallen World

Lightning strikes again
The flames dancing wildly
It crumbles and falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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McBride  Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Great write, what a great picture with words
Poet Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 5:41 PM
Nice imagery here Lesley.Enjoyed.
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Very descritive work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Expressive haiku with nice images, Lesley
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