Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Written to Dr. Ram's form Balassi Stanza just for fun..
The good, bad, and the ugly of the Sweetgum..If one could take away those seed balls which can throw one down in a heartbeat..The range of color of this tree is so varied..The leaves can be red, yellow, or crimson or a mix on one tree..Sara

A Fall Morn

Down where Golden Rods blooms
Creek runs to rushing tune
And mist rises on cool morns

Shrouding red Sweetgum leaves
Gentle wind blows through eaves
Sighing comfort not forlorn

Lazy sound so soothing
Snuzzle in relaxing
Listening to dove that mourns

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Cory Long October 1, 2011 at 5:13 PM this was beautiful with such a wonderful flow.. cory

M. Hussain Effendi September 30, 2011 at 4:22 PM This ones so beautifully written, madame. Really loved it.

Eve Peterson September 28, 2011 at 8:09 PM another good one.

Jack Horne September 28, 2011 at 5:21 PM I love the visuals on this one, Sara. I feel I could be there. LOL, as you say, any job is better than being TP!!!

Russell Sivey September 28, 2011 at 2:53 PM Beautiful, glorious write! You did awesome with this poem Sara!

Nette Onclaud September 28, 2011 at 9:42 AM a wonderful setting for the theme, sara.. best of luck! :) huggs, nette

Tony Lane September 28, 2011 at 9:30 AM Our neighbors have one in their yard. I get to look at it. They get to clean up after it. Tony