A fairytale or not, Short story poem

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She acted her way into his heart. The lovely actress was very smart She new her brown eyes and figure so slim. Would win his love, if she acted for him. Her name was Meg, He was Harry Before too long they would marry He gave up being prince one day Now they live happily in the USA.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/22/2024 9:34:00 PM

She acted. Truly. Was he affected? I do not know. England did not suit them. Congratulations!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/22/2024 9:59:00 PM

Well we know he was affected enough to marry her. :) She is lovely, and he certainly had his choice of ladies that might have said "yes". Lets hope they can have a peaceful marriage. Thankx for your comment Christuraj.

Jay Narain

Date: 1/12/2024 10:35:00 AM

A royal story retold. I love your short poem.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/22/2024 11:50:00 AM

Thanks Dear Jay. Appreciate the comment. Best wishes from Wen.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/11/2024 8:58:00 PM

Hah! Yes i read his book. Did you? Lol sad how sometimes relationships change people. I think whatever may be the circumstances, it is not right to reveal details of family affairs. Thats betrayal, and hypocrisy. Im not a fan of this fairytale. I love your first stanza the most: pleasure reading your work

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/11/2024 11:10:00 PM

I did not read his book, or am I interested to. I am not a royalist. I admired and felt sorry for his mother. I have no interest in Royal folk. My muse wrote the little story. I intended it to be a ballerina and a prince. My muse decided the actress. So I found the fake picture with no copyright. There was no innuendo intended. Thanks for your comment Empress.