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A Fairytale

Did you ever read a fairytale, maybe the fun book was on sale. I had a fairytale book with a huge purple whale, riding on his back was a yellow fox with a pink tail. the purple whale was large-scale, the yellow fox loved wearing a ponytail. They loved to drink ginger ale, as they eat dishes of fruit cocktail. Guess this is enough of my wild tale, now off to buy a new fairytale book at a yard sale.

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Karen Croft

Date: 1/23/2024 4:36:00 PM

Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2024 5:58:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your congratulations. Glad to see you here reading my fun "A Fairytale" write. Have a great/fun day.....................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/22/2024 9:24:00 PM

Indeed, a suspense-filled very interesting Fairytale with soft twists and turns. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/23/2024 4:47:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be suspense-filled/very interesting/with soft twists, turns. I enjoyed writing this fun story for the kids. Have a great/fun day.....................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/22/2024 10:18:00 AM

"2 Place" A Fairytale~Date Written:1/11/2024

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/22/2024 2:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/22/2024 10:21:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "A Fairytale" write. It is great to see you back again. Hugs... Have a great/fun day......................

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/17/2024 6:32:00 AM

Fairytales are always love.... And this is indeed a lovely write.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:35:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "A Fairytale" write. Yes, Fairytales are love/fun to read... Have a great/fun day......................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/13/2024 4:35:00 AM

You weaved your words wonderfully, Paula---what a joy to read! Much enjoyed the voice of your cute and fun theme.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2024 11:13:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be a joy to read. It is great you enjoyed this one. Have a great/fun day......................

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/12/2024 4:09:00 PM

Such an adorable, fun read dear Paula. I’m picturing the whale and fox right now - an unusual combination of which I loved. Fairytales are magical to read and yours would be a lovely addition to any child’s bookcase. Really enjoyed reading it and it put a big smile on my face. Thank you! Hugs to you our very imaginative friend. Xx :):)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2024 10:40:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Fairytale" write. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" I thought the huge purple whale/yellow fox with a pink tail would be fun for a child to read about. Have a great/fun day......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2024 3:15:00 PM

Must have been written by Dr. Seuss. LOL..Nice fun work you have written. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2024 10:36:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "A Fairytale" write. No Dr. Seuss here just me. Hahaha!!! Have a great/fun day......................

Ink Empress

Date: 1/12/2024 12:27:00 AM

This is so cute and creative: you are really good at writing fairytales and doing storytelling in such a lighthearted manner which your readers truly appreciate and feel! I love the flow of this and i think this will score high too in the contest. Best wishes. Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2024 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your best wishes. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be so cute/creative. It makes me happy you enjoyed my fairytale storytelling. I really enjoyed writing this one. Have a great/fun day......................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2024 10:44:00 PM

A colossal imagination. I used to love fairy tales.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2024 12:51:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you like my colossal imagination "A Fairytale" write. It was fun to write. Guess I got carried away with this one. I still love Fairytale books. Have a great/fun day......................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 1/11/2024 8:51:00 PM

Sounds like a lovely fairytale Paula :-) My favourite fairytale was "Little red riding hood" A sweet read for me this evening. Smiles and hugs, Anne :-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2024 12:47:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "A Fairytale" write. I also enjoyed reading "Little red riding hood." Hugs... Have a great/fun day......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/11/2024 1:52:00 PM

Hilarious write, Paula, Wonderfully creative)))), Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2024 12:45:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be hilarious/wonderfully creative. Your kind words make me very happy. Have a great/fun day......................

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/11/2024 11:54:00 AM

I do love fairytale books Paula, yours sound like fun! Hope your 2024 id off to a great start xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2024 1:40:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "A Fairytale" write. Fairytale books are so much fun to read/give as as gift. Well my 2024 is off/running. Hope your 2024 is off/running with blessings. Have a great/fun day......................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2024 11:30:00 AM

- I have read many fairy tales ... but, none like yours, Paula - I am sure the fairy tale will end well ... good luck :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2024 1:27:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your good luck. Glad you like my whimsical/fun "A Fairytale" write. Oh yes, this tale will end well for my large purple whale/the yellow fox with a pink tail are best friends. Hahaha!!! Hugs... Have a great/fun day......................

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2024 10:40:00 AM

The whimsical and fantastical nature of fairytales, as well as the joy and imagination that they bring to the reader. The subject matter revolves around a fairytale book featuring a large purple whale and a yellow fox with a pink tail, and their adventures together. Well done, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2024 1:25:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you like my whimsical/fun "A Fairytale" write. Yes, my large purple whale/the yellow fox with a pink tail are best friends. Hahaha!!! Have a great/fun day......................

Miranda Hawley

Date: 1/11/2024 10:32:00 AM

Fun little whimsy rhyme. 5 star rating from me and it got a Fav!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2024 1:22:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun whimsical "A Fairytale" write. I see 5 star/FAV??? That put a huge smile on my heart. "Thanks" Have a great/fun day......................

Silent One

Date: 1/11/2024 10:20:00 AM

You whimsical poem takes the reader on a delightful journey through the pages of a fairytale, offering a charming and imaginative narrative... Best of luck in the contest dear..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2024 1:19:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your best of luck. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be whimsical/a delightful journey. That makes me very happy. Have a great/fun day......................

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 9:10:00 AM

adorable poem, Paula. I used to teach high school German and often read (in German) many of those famous German fairy tales. They loved it...I ramble, sorry. Have a splendid day, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2024 1:15:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be adorable. Have a great/fun day.......................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2024 9:04:00 AM

A Fairytale~Date Written:1/11/2024