Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

A Fairytale

Did you ever read a fairytale,  
maybe the fun book was on sale.  
I had a fairytale book with a huge purple whale,  
riding on his back was a yellow fox with a pink tail.  
the purple whale was large-scale,  
the yellow fox loved wearing a ponytail.  
They loved to drink ginger ale,  
as they eat dishes of fruit cocktail.  
Guess this is enough of my wild tale,  
now off to buy a new fairytale book at a yard sale.

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Karen Croft January 23, 2024 at 4:36 PM Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2024 at 5:58 AM Thanks for reading/comment and for your congratulations. Glad to see you here reading my fun "A Fairytale" write. Have a great/fun day.....................

Christuraj Alex January 22, 2024 at 9:24 PM Indeed, a suspense-filled very interesting Fairytale with soft twists and turns. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith January 23, 2024 at 4:47 AM Thanks for reading/comment and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be suspense-filled/very interesting/with soft twists, turns. I enjoyed writing this fun story for the kids. Have a great/fun day.....................

Paula Goldsmith January 22, 2024 at 10:18 AM "2 Place" A Fairytale~Date Written:1/11/2024

Anne-Lise Andresen January 22, 2024 at 2:10 AM - Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith January 22, 2024 at 10:21 AM Thanks for reading/comment and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "A Fairytale" write. It is great to see you back again. Hugs...  Have a great/fun day......................

Paghunda Zahid January 17, 2024 at 6:32 AM Fairytales are always love.... And this is indeed a lovely write. Paula Goldsmith January 21, 2024 at 7:35 AM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "A Fairytale" write. Yes, Fairytales are love/fun to read... Have a great/fun day......................

Vijay Pandit January 13, 2024 at 4:35 AM You weaved your words wonderfully, Paula---what a joy to read! Much enjoyed the voice of your cute and fun theme. Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2024 at 11:13 AM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be a joy to read. It is great you enjoyed this one. Have a great/fun day......................

Christina Bowring January 12, 2024 at 4:09 PM Such an adorable, fun read dear Paula. I’m picturing the whale and fox right now - an unusual combination of which I loved. Fairytales are magical to read and yours would be a lovely addition to any child’s bookcase. Really enjoyed reading it and it put a big smile on my face. Thank you! Hugs to you our very imaginative friend. Xx :):) Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2024 at 10:40 AM Thanks for reading/comment and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Fairytale" write. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" I thought the huge purple whale/yellow fox with a pink tail would be fun for a child to read about. Have a great/fun day......................

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2024 at 3:15 PM Must have been written by Dr. Seuss. LOL..Nice fun work you have written. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2024 at 10:36 AM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "A Fairytale" write. No Dr. Seuss here just me. Hahaha!!! Have a great/fun day......................

Ink Empress January 12, 2024 at 12:27 AM This is so cute and creative: you are really good at writing fairytales and doing storytelling in such a lighthearted manner which your readers truly appreciate and feel! I love the flow of this and i think this will score high too in the contest. Best wishes. Sending you light always Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2024 at 12:57 PM Thanks for reading/comment and for your best wishes. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be so cute/creative. It makes me happy you enjoyed my fairytale storytelling. I really enjoyed writing this one. Have a great/fun day......................

Victor Buhagiar January 11, 2024 at 10:44 PM A colossal imagination. I used to love fairy tales. Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2024 at 12:51 PM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you like my colossal imagination "A Fairytale" write. It was fun to write. Guess I got carried away with this one. I still love Fairytale books. Have a great/fun day......................

Anne E Sangster - K January 11, 2024 at 8:51 PM Sounds like a lovely fairytale Paula :-) My favourite fairytale was "Little red riding hood" A sweet read for me this evening. Smiles and hugs, Anne :-) Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2024 at 12:47 PM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "A Fairytale" write. I also enjoyed reading "Little red riding hood." Hugs...  Have a great/fun day......................

Panagiota Romios January 11, 2024 at 1:52 PM Hilarious write, Paula, Wonderfully creative)))), Pangie Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2024 at 12:45 PM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be hilarious/wonderfully creative. Your kind words make me very happy. Have a great/fun day......................

Mike Gentile January 11, 2024 at 11:54 AM I do love fairytale books Paula, yours sound like fun! Hope your 2024 id off to a great start xxoo Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2024 at 1:40 PM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "A Fairytale" write. Fairytale books are so much fun to read/give as as gift. Well my 2024 is off/running. Hope your 2024 is off/running with blessings. Have a great/fun day......................

Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2024 at 11:30 AM - I have read many fairy tales ... but, none like yours, Paula - I am sure the fairy tale will end well ... good luck :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2024 at 1:27 PM Thanks for reading/comment and for your good luck. Glad you like my whimsical/fun "A Fairytale" write. Oh yes, this tale will end well for my large purple whale/the yellow fox with a pink tail are best friends. Hahaha!!! Hugs... Have a great/fun day......................

Sotto Poet January 11, 2024 at 10:40 AM The whimsical and fantastical nature of fairytales, as well as the joy and imagination that they bring to the reader. The subject matter revolves around a fairytale book featuring a large purple whale and a yellow fox with a pink tail, and their adventures together. Well done, Paula Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2024 at 1:25 PM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you like my whimsical/fun "A Fairytale" write. Yes, my large purple whale/the yellow fox with a pink tail are best friends. Hahaha!!! Have a great/fun day......................

Miranda Hawley January 11, 2024 at 10:32 AM Fun little whimsy rhyme. 5 star rating from me and it got a Fav! Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2024 at 1:22 PM Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun whimsical "A Fairytale" write. I see 5 star/FAV??? That put a huge smile on my heart. "Thanks"  Have a great/fun day......................

Silent One January 11, 2024 at 10:20 AM You whimsical poem takes the reader on a delightful journey through the pages of a fairytale, offering a charming and imaginative narrative... Best of luck in the contest dear.. Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2024 at 1:19 PM Thanks for reading/comment and for your best of luck. Glad you found my fun "A Fairytale" write to be whimsical/a delightful journey. That makes me very happy. Have a great/fun day......................

Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2024 at 9:04 AM A Fairytale~Date Written:1/11/2024